I started writing Equine Effect last year and haven't touched it since. Although I'm still not sure when my hiatus will end, I'd just like to know what a fellow Mass Effect fan's opinion is regarding it. If it isn't too much trouble, mind giving it a look if you haven't already? I'd greatly appreciate it.

Your story is really cool. I really want to read more of it. The idea is great, and you were doing a pretty good job of writing it.
You have some problems, but they're really small. You tend to tell more than you show, and you have some minor spelling and grammar issues.
However, it doesn't derail the story that much, and I would totally keep reading it if you added more chapters.

If you hurry, you can make an April Fools day joke chapter, where the reapers learn the value of friendship.

I gave you a few what I hope are constructive remarks.
Does Rarity romance any-one?