Does anyone have any cover art recommendations for my Cpt. Sparkle story? Also anyone have the time to preread the story?

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3343549 Wow....how are my googlings never this fruitful?

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I might have the time although before anything else, what sort of feedback are you looking for. What is the general sense of the story aside from the eventual Romance, slice of life or something else?

3343615 Its shaping up leaning towards an Adventure theme. A retelling of the first episodes (Because that's what this site needs!). I'm looking for someone to make sure it makes sense, and another pair of eyes on it for grammar and spelling