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Title: Bugthesda Blues
Tags: Comedy. There might be more tags, I'm not sure.

Rating: Everyone. Not sure about this either. Maybe this should be Teen?

General Summary/Description: A changeling working at a software company finally understands what 'crunch time' means.

This is a one chapter story.
What type of help are you looking for?: Editor/Pre-reader

Information the reviewer needs in order to review your work:
This is a slice of life story about a changeling working in the Quality Assurance section of a software company. He's trying to get Foalout 76 out the door.

This is my first slice of life so I want to make sure it works.

Specific things you want the reviewer to focus on (optional):
The story has to make sense.

A lot of the references deal with Bethesda Softworks's history.
I wonder if this will still be understandable by folks who are not familiar with what Bethesda has done.
Does the humor work in the story?
I'm also not sure if I need more tags and the rating.

Other important information: Ask me.
Form of communication you want to use with your reviewer: fimfiction PM, G-docs

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