To anyone that can help proofread this. Im a newbie writer who needs help.https://www.fimfiction.net/story/556759/twilights-lost-dragon

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link leads to a 404 error. you'll want to set yourself an unpublished view password in the story's settings (the same place where you set the title and stuff)

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Ok here's the password . Twispike19

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alrighty. rule of thumb, new action/speaker, new paragraph. please split up your paragraphs for readability, or else you'll for sure be rejected when you submit your fic 👍

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Ohhhh. Ok this makes sense. Thank you so much for you help.