Hello and welcome back as we look back at the various plot holes that the movie “Starfleet humans” produced. And once again, this is touching upon a little on Sunset Shimmer.

You might be wondering why a lot of it hits her...that is mainly because 49% of the plot holes revolve around just how little she matches with her cannon persona. And this is not thinking about how she is not all that great of a villian.

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For a long time I wanted to include a Macbeth homage in Starfleet Nemesis where Grand Ruler would be confronted with Twilight's ghost and forced to confront his own guilt and his part in her death while his loyal lords and officers look on in bewilderment.

And now that I'm rewriting whole chapters I finally got to do it, as I replaced the gladiators bit in the banquet scene (which was supposed to lead into a subplot, but didn't) and replaced it with this:

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The second prologue of My Brave Pony: Starfleet Nemesis has been revised and updated, as Rainbow angsts, Lightning broods, Fluttershy (finally) demonstrates the inner strength that various characters insist she has but I always forgot to show on the page, and Starla gives us a charming glimpse into her feelings:

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So, when I said I was going to give Starfleet Nemesis my undivided attention...

Marching Orders, the first proper chapter of the fic, has been updated as Starla continues to be awful but hopefully in a more relatable way that she was before we could see into her head. She's still the bad guy, but I'm going for a bit less 'jackass' and a bit more 'tragic flaws' this time around. Kind of, anyway.

So check that out.

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