Troubleshooting · 1:18am Apr 12th, 2019
I'm having a little trouble for the next few chapters of Lifetime Benefits.
I'm having a little trouble for the next few chapters of Lifetime Benefits.
Titled “Upper Crusted” and sitting at 7.5k words long, it’s with prereaders now. The chapter will go live when they’re done with it and I’ve completed my usual pair of editing passes, most likely tomorrow. As promised, the chapter centers around Midnight’s punishment of Upper Crust but starts with the well-earned ending of the Pinkie/Ember scene.
Sorry! No chapter this week. Life has been busy on top of Chapter 11 being a battle to write without falling into a plothole. There were soooo many opportunities with all the characters present to mess something up royally. I had to be sure I got it right in the writing.
I did not expect my first chapter of Tantabus in the Night to be seen so fast like it has. And I am working on the second chapter called "Burnt Upper Crust" today. It should be out by tonight or tomorrow afternoon/evening. The Inspiration for this story was actually given to me by Yabuki, a very close friend of mine. So a big thank you to him for the idea. Now, I would like to give you all a sneak peak into the next chapter:
Chapter 12 is live and boy howdy is it a long one! I broke my goal of keeping it around 5K. I know I could've cut the chapter early after the first line break, but I didn't have the heart to leave on a cliffhanger after last time. For those of you who like longer chapters, I hope this makes up for nothing last week! For those of you who don't like more horsewords per week, my sanity thanks you, but also you're reading an evolving long-fic. I question your judgement.