...was the sound of a point going by over an EqD's pre-reader's head.

I got Over a Cardboard Sea bounced from there, by somebody who gave me an amusingly detailed critique. Amusingly, because it proved that this person 100% missed the point. I shouldn't use passive voice, for example, because it makes things feel distant and disconnected. Which made me want to reply with "Yes! That's exactly why I used it!"

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Holy crap guys!!! Do you see this?! I won! I so did not expect to win. I was in like... fourth place (out of 8) in the community voting, and I'd figured I probably didn't have much chance, but then I won!

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!

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Or for the other awesome Luna story of your choice.

Check out the Luna is The Best Pony group contest. There are only 8 stories, so there's still time to read before the contest ends tomorrow.

Or you can just skip the rest, and read and vote for my entry, [url=Ohttp://www.fimfiction.net/story/176379/over-a-cardboard-sea]Over a Cardboard Sea.

...but if that's how they're running things, that's how they're running things, and someday I really would like to win a writing contest. (Somebody once told me to stop caring about getting followers and only try to win contests. Ha! Turns out you can win at least some contests more easily if you have more followers.) Anyway.

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