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I like! Moar! Moar for the sex god!

2520651 SEX FOR THE SEX GOD!!! BJ'S FOR THE ORAL THRONE!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::pinkiecrazy:

Ohohoh yes.

The Chrysalis tag unnerves me though...

Cadence sure has a perverted mind.
:twilightsheepish:

2523980 She likely fulfills the "stalker" portion of the title name, to round it all off. :P

Moar Boar wants moar.

If that's okay with you.

Oooh, me likey. :pinkiehappy: Looking forward to seeing more.

Twi and Shiny going at it, and peeping Cadance watching them. Sounds familiar... I wonder why. :ajsmug:

(OK, I won't say I did it better, but I will say I did it first. :twilightsheepish: )

So now the question is what will Cadance do now? I'll wait and see what happens.

haha, I know who made that picture! good job!

Very sweet and innocent. It needed a little more buildup for my taste, but I like it when clops go into these naughty territories. A little backstory would be awesome, if possible.

I must say, though, Twilight doesn't talk like Twilight. I don't see that shy, socially awkward nerd we've all come to know and love. Her speech and thoughts make her out into just a regular girl, but not Twilight.

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Every time I try to look up pony incest porn, I see your face.
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I think saying that should bother me, but it doesn't.

2538249 You see my face? :rainbowderp: I'm just going to pretend that you mean my RD avatar, because the alternative carries some very disturbing implications.

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No, your face. I'm in your house. And you're out of toilet paper.

2538457 Just look under the sink, on the left side. Also, please excuse me while I make a quick three-digit phone call. :twilightoops:

Nothing I can say will describe how hot that was.

So I leave you with a creepy Pinkie smile at the spectacle. :pinkiehappy:

I don't think Cadence's entrance could have been more perfect.

Shining and Twilight sitting in a tree, do-ing what they shouldn't be~
~Starts with S, ends with X, oh dear Celestia it must be sex!~

:rainbowlaugh:

And things get better.

Cadence trotted gaily into the room, singing to herself. “Shining and Twilight sitting in a tree, do-ing what they shouldn't be~”

OMG, Cadence, you fucking troll...

2522278 A Christian reading incest stories? I'm sorry but I'll see you in hell.

EDIT: Why so many dislikes (so many mad Christians)? Everyone should know by now that the Bible is one big incest party, you Christians in denial much? :)

Eeyup gonna have to fave this one.

2562327 Hey, if you get there first, can you save me a seat. I hear that hell gets really crowded reAlly fast.

2562327 Never looked into the old testament I take it?

2611238 I know there is a lot of incest in the Bible even though it says incest is wrong and you'll burn in hell for it, then again the Bible also says that the Earth is flat, it's a silly book :D there is also some gay sex if I recall... didn't one of Moses sons have sex with him while Moses was hammered (which BTW is also a sin recording to the Bible, I mean being drunk and having gay sex)?

2583672 No prob brah :)

Hows chrysalis inolved though? It says chrysalis is in this...... Missslabeled! This fic is in UNACCEPTABLE CONDITION! UNACCEPTALBE! I wanted to see changling pussy.....
(favs anyway)

That was without a doubt the best thing I've read all night.

"Shining and Twilight sitting in a tree, doing stuff that they shouldn't be~
~Starts with S, ends with X, oh my Celestia it must be sex."

I'm only down voting it because it feels rough, dispite liking a lot of it, and the little "twiligh and shining sitting in a tree" number made me laugh my ass off. Unfortunately as I said, it felt sub par, and some parts were too rushed along to get engaged into the story, I think you need to stretch out this first chapter more with past experiences WHY they're together, and shining seems to accept twilight being there in a non nonchalant way rather than "rushed into it because he's turned on.

Feel free to ignore me but just felt you deserved a reason for a downvote when I don't mean to imply I hate it.

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I'm very sorry. At the time it was put up I wasn't sure if I could add/remove characters in an edit. She is prominent in chapter 3 but that's taking a while since I write very slowly.

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Thanks for the post! I understand what you mean, this was an attempt to write a 'simple clopfic' while only including the barest bones of backstory. With more plot it would be pretending to be something that it isn't.

As weird as it may sound, I enjoy fictional incest. Makes for a good story.

What a :twistnerd:! Seriously, I liked it from a plot standpoint, but juicy mind control via chemicals is always a fun thing too. :pinkiehappy:

I was expecting Cadence to just stand right up after all was said and done, and fuck Chrysalis silly, or something.

Checkmate indeed.

Unless Twilight comes in. Thing could get complicated then...

I am predicting four-way.(Cadence, Chrysalis, Twilight, and Shining)

Shining is about to get really lucky or be drained within an inch of this life.

Well, Shiny, there's only one thing to do.

Do her in the butt. No crazy mind-control pussy juice there.

Shining Will Save the day, he's not so dense anymore. Heck, I want to see Shining here be the assertive one here and be on top of three mares.

Go Shining! Make your herd!!!

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