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Damn! A lot of peepl r talking bout dis. I don't care if there positive or negative comments, just as long as people r talkin bout you. So thanks.
PS stix and stones can break my bones but a fifty foot fall will kill y'all!
A lot of these comments are actually pretty funny i'm not gonna lie. Although a lot of them are pretty sexual.
I stand by my "shit" wether you like it or not I don't care. It's my second story n i'm kind of new here. I ain't no shakespeare, this Idea just came into my head and I just typed it up. Yes i'll admit it's not the best thing someones written, but it's not the worst. I'll be sure to see all of your guy's best selling fanfics.
I have literally no idea what all those comments were about. But seeing them deleted is… degrading, to be honest.
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Well I was here for that period of time, I like watching ship wrecks. Pico pie actually did an in depth review for as long as he could, though the review for chapter three got a little silly. Then there were a few comments laughing at the other comments. Then there was the comments on how Even in comments the author can't speak English along with a handful of I can't even, few comments about gay sex and then also this spamming various groups.
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I've spotted several things which really do need addressed already. An almost compelling urge to save this fic flows over me.
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Oh yes there were several comments about what could be fixed. I even pointed out sept- means seven not six.
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Mm. I just read the fourth chapter. What in the-
Weird OCs, pony creator, random author notes halfway through, swearing, context, made-up rubbish, more anachronisms than I can name, overpowered ponies, exaggerations, unprecedented rape, Pinkie throwing knives, more context, grammar, and did I mention CONTEXT?
And that pretty much sums up what's wrong with this fic. Not trying to be harsh. Just honest. I won't be surprised if this comment gets deleted. But I personally think Fimfiction should establish a quality requirement.
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Don't bother anymore, it's an obvious trollfic.
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It's a terrible troll fic though. I know I'm just feeding him but I really don't think this even should qualify as a troll fic.
love it love everything about
it
A bunch of deleted comments except for the author's which have been bombarded with negative ratings?
Ah, so it's one of those authors, ain't it?
2537472 Yeah. He also nonchalantly tossed it into my editing group without following a single one of our guidelines. Submission into folders isn't even the driving force of our operation at all; we require people join and post a thread explaining what they want. He's not even a member of the group, just decided "I'll toss my horrible story into there and see what happens."
So,
-bad author
-unable to take criticism
-deleting comments
-"I'm new here"
-"It's not the worst thing ever"
-total lack of anything resembling competence with the site
-tosses it into editing groups like a retard expecting us to sculpt his dump into gold
People like this are allowed to vote.
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I agree. Just looking at this screams somebody that is doing it on purpose.
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I'd be glad for you to compare your fan fic to my fan fic. I have this odd feeling even my troll fic would stand up better against this. This site has many writing guide, many of kind people and many examples of well written stories. It is not hard to seek help. Also if you do want to make a story succeed in the future I might suggest that deleting comments shows an unapproachable author. Considering you deleted reviews for your story that proves true. Even if some one leaves negative input, offer to fix it, people and ponies alike enjoy seeing that.
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Delete this comment and I will rain down upon you with the vengeance of 1000 suns.
Do de do do... What do we have here? A fic with the red bar like it's that time of the month? Dear God, look at this mess of a comment section, and dear lord look at the Pony Creator of a terrible O.C. I imagine people are telling you that this story is complete shit, therefore any and all criticism that you have received you refuse to take. Yeah, if you think I'm going to walk on by this fic, and not bury this fic under a lengthy rage review, then you would be dead wrong.
"Solstice, yo Solstice wake the fuck up. This guy needs an ass whopping in the form of typed abuse."
"Fuck it man, I'm tryin ta sleep asswipe."
"But dude listen to this, 'Rainbow Dashes Arch Enemy'" Sostice sat straight up.
"Oh It Is On!" He hopped up quickly and opened his laptop cracking his fingers in the process.
Alright mother bucker here I am, ready and raging hard. What I got morning wood, and I'm sure you wanted to know that. Why? Because my penis is the most important thing since sliced cheese. Anyways, hope you like a cheese filled anus.
You don't say, because Obviously Lightning Dust wasn't just as fast. Fucking do your RESEARCH!
Really, because we too stupid to look it up.
Already dropping the ball on basic grammar, cool I know I can completely destroy this fic now.
Sister? Alright, how about no? In fact I bet I could stick a fork in both of my eyes and shit on my keyboard and my shit would still know better than to say Rainbow Dash is Scootaloo's sister.
Oh god, it's a foursome of awful O.C's. Please say they catch aids and die.
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And it will be boarding you.
West Phillydelphia born and raised, to rage against my readers is how I spent most of my days. Chillin out writin, actin a foal, till a couple of guys up to no good. Started making fun of my 'livelihood'. I got one little comment and got scared, and deleted every comment because I don't care.
You are so welcome for that one.
You just went full retard. My buddy Prince venture wondered if you needed a helmet and some bubble wrap.
-sigh- Just, dear god if I had a dollar for everytime a first timer didn't pair his O.C with a member of the Mane Six, then I'd have about tree fiddy. There was one time it worked, so it only half counts.
You, you sir completed the impossible. You have made me lose hope in all that is Equine. Your brony card is revoaked until you apologize for terrorizing us with this story. I'm done, I'm not reading anymore, and you are very fucking lucky I got this far. Time for the review.
Have you ever looked at the shit smeared under the sink and wondered what it would look like if you put googly eyes on it? I just discovered that you culd do so, and it makes it damn sexy. Anyways enough about my love with mildew. Lets move on the thing worse than that mildew. Perhaps the cat corpse rotting into a goo pile under you bed has a better smell than this fic would. Needless to say author, you have a fucking long way to go, and I don' think I need to explain why. Since you kept explaining things in the story, I shall explain this to you as simply as possible.
Your characters are overpowered and dull, you have nothing in canon in both characters and show. You need to shoot your horse for breaking it's leg from the amount of grammatical errors you threw on this poor poor stories back.
Now, you do have one thing going for you, you can tell a story. You can, if you can overcome these dumb first timer mistakes. I know you can do it, and In fact I am offering my help. I am much nicer if you ask for help.
As for this story, do not send it to me to fix, I will refuse. Just take it down, and start something new, you know if I didn't hurt your feelings too bad. I don't care if I did hurt them, but I am serious about my writing, and I expect that from every person that posts on here. Even troll fics have standards, and you don't have any idea of how to write one if this is one.
Finally, just a few parting words to show my love for you.
Final Verdict: Slippy Slimey Googly Sexy Mildew, Why did you take my Virginity?
sorry but, if you can't take negativity or criticism, you shouldn't write
2538183 This.
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2536907 We don't care if you're not like Shakespear, because we all aren't. That you're problem, you don't know how to take crticism, don't know how to accept the fact that this story is a pile of hay, and don't know the fact that you've just deleted one of my comments with at least crticism.
I have to admit that the third part of my criticism were off. Your story just pissed me off.
2537832 To be honest, I enjoyed yours even with the fact that it is a trollfic.