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Mudraynebow


Look into my eyes... It's where my demons hide... Don't get too close, it's dark inside...

Comments ( 26 )

Wat. :rainbowderp:

I love it.
:heart:

Sum secky righting they're.

what the hell did I just read?

dafuq? wha....:rainbowhuh:
uhmmm.... my mind is so full of fuck right now!
:pinkiecrazy:

You know, at this point I would make an interesting or funny observation, but for this story... OMGWTFBBQ

That was the funniest thing I've ever read. LOL!!!!!!

Its funny how you warns us ten times abut the stories brutality. Yet there's absolutely no brutality nor anything remotely "Explicit" on it.
There's no set up what so ever, nor character develope, nor establishment of ideas or motivations for the characters. There's nothing.
If you want a horror story to work you need something called atmosphere. Yet it's hard for me to even call this a story. Is just a bunch of random events.

Comment posted by Mudraynebow deleted May 3rd, 2015

Lol that was a messed up party. I'm not sure if it has the random tag but it should. Lol Rainbow Dash randomly slit Spike's throat :rainbowlaugh:

...that's a little messed up that i laughed at that... Ah well :pinkiehappy:

Could have been gorier.
:derpytongue2:

"Pinkie Pie!" Rainbow shouted. "I'm trying to eat these guts!"

Hmmmmm ...

meh, 2/10, could not clop. Your style is ambiguous and dull, your imagery is cliche and usual, and your editing is just absolute shit.
just because you're writing a one shot doesn't mean you don't need to put in any effort.:duck:

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First of all, not really meant to be a clopfic, more of a trollfic then anything. Second of all, I have NO IDEA what the fuck was going through my head when I wrote this shit, this was one of those stories where I just kind of slapped the keyboard a few times, produced some random shit and called it a story:twilightblush: I've written WAY better, trust me!

2596944
Nothing explicit? Tell me, would you read this to a 4-9 year old child? If there's nothing explicit in it, it's obviously be ok for them to read:twilightsheepish:

3191817 Why are you writting me a second answer to the same coment from 4 mnths ago?:rainbowhuh:
But in answer to your question: Depending on the child's level of innocence/ignorance, I could toally read them this or any other story. No matter how explict it is.

2596944 >Nothing "Explicit"
:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Then again, I've heard of people who don't think cannibalism and fucking dead things is explicit...:derpytongue2:
BUT STILL:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

i think there is somethin wrong with me...i read this, then i went to sleep ----- and i slept perfectly:pinkiecrazy::rainbowhuh:





i later woke up from said sleep horny as all hell:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

3660773
Is that... A bad thing?:unsuresweetie:

3665263 im not really sure:twilightblush:...my girl says yes...other parts of me are screaming"HELL NO!!".....



so, im not really sure

The Aristocrats!

The idea is good, but it's a pity it wasn't more descriptive.

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I was going for an R rating, not NC-17.

this was fucking awesome
the apex of human intelligence really:rainbowlaugh:

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