i didnt even read the story before giving it my hate.

but now i opened this and read a paragraph. you deserve all the hate youve received. after the first paragraph ive already decided im not going to read the rest of this shit. how did this even pass to be on the site? as in gettting past the admins? its such garbage and isnt nearly written correctly.

Finally gave this a read to see if this is worth more than the first one.

at the hands of this swag fag vampire.

Because Justin Bieber can attract a 12 year old fangirl, quite easily.

his probably dead brother lying their with his throat sliced open gushing blood.

God dammit. When I told you to shove a zebra cock down your throat, I didn't mean it literally.

I wish that was me lying there dead while he stay alive and enjoy life for 5 more seconds."

So you would trade with Death, using your own life, just to let a Bieber-obsessed fangirl to live for five more seconds?

As Jack walked up to Gold, "you thought you were the strongest pony in Equestria? Pfff...please...you're my bitch! Gold tried to crawl next to his brother and tried to hug him one last time.

Gold slowly spread his brother's legs, rubbing his eager shaft as it touched the glory hole of his lifeless flesh and blood.

"Awww...isn't that sweet. He was actually very good tasting for a stallion.

Bitch please; Gold's brother isn't even a stallion.

He was very hard to kill, but in the end, he was just a little bitch that met a grueling fate.

And that fate is taking a zebra cock vampire fangs, down his throat neck.

Hopefully you won't die like a little bitch too."

The vampire showed what's under behind his sheath mouth. A long, throbbing pointed cock fangs.

Gold was the maddest he had ever been.

At least insert some effort in telling how mad he was. All you said was that he was maddest that he could ever be, and nothing else than his cock starting to flare.

And since I don't want to dwell this story anymore, because I don't want to make you feel bad, I'm going to stop.

Sorry about gay sex references above. I couldn't just finish reading a sentence above, without thinking of gay sex.

3059028 I did nahhhhht.

Ok. I read this. I don't want to be an ass, but this is shit. I mean seriously, 30 flights of stairs? A retarded amount of spelling errors and nearly no effort put into writing the story or even making a good plot? I'm favouriting this, but not because i like it, but because i want to see where this train wreck goes.