Rainbow Dash, conflicted about her feelings, heads to Ponyville's library where she hopes to see the only pony who might understand her.
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As always: any and all criticisms, critiques, and general feedback are welcomed
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Thunderhalk89
Not a very clever writer. I like pie... I think that's it
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*come on
Haha, this is more of an explanation than a fanfiction.
I don't mind that.
I don't get why this story has more dislikes than likes. I found it quite enjoyable.
Glad I finally found someone to explain to me what the *BUY SOME APPLES* is a waifu.
Yet more proof that most FiMFiction downvotes are from users who didn't even bother to look at the story.
I actually enjoyed this. Well done.
2567869
Thanks for the heads up; fixed now.
2576330>>2574602>>2568731>>2569654
Thanks for the likes.
I must admit, that I was not that big of a fan of it and only really went through with writing it so that I could practice dialog.
I would hazard to guess that a few dislikes are because Rainbow Dash has wings in this story. That's what people were complaining about, right? That Rainbow has wings? I don't know. I don't pay attention to what people complain about. I just watch and enjoy the show. Hello Kitty could randomly appear, do a dance number, and never be acknowledged and I would still enjoy it....
On second thought, someone at Hasbro should get on that.
2576639 you must mean twilight right?
Hmm...
I like this story but I think it could use a bit of a polish. There wasn't much of a conflict; or more accurately, what little internal conflict there was in Rainbow was quickly and effortlessly resolved, leaving the story without much of a hook to keep me interested. I did enjoy the waifu twist though, I did not see that coming. The ending felt off; it felt less like a wrap up and more like it just trailed off. Although, taking a second look, that last line does kind of wrap it up, I guess it just feels a little sudden, like a runner slowing down and almost ready to stop when-suddenly-brick-wall-the-end. A couple of minor spelling mistakes but nothing really bad.
Overall, very well written and original. I enjoyed it. Have a like.
2597581
Thanks,
I kind of saw the lack of conflict myself, and started jotting down notes about the primary conflict in my notes on future story ideas.
As for the ending... I've never been very skilled at figuring out how to start or end a written assignment. Guess I still have that weakness. Thanks for bringing it to my attention so that I can practice/work on addressing it in future stories.
Did they brake the forth wall there
good story
All I can say about this story is really? I can't believe that I haven't seen a Rainbow in love with a fictional character shipping before. The kitchen sink, watermelon, and one other thing I can't remember, but never an Equestrian fictional character. I dislike the term "Waifu," but since Pinkie brought it up I'm cool with it. That and her loving candy land characters pretty damn funny.
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Glad you liked it.
I really don't care for the term when people use it in a "mature" way either. I was trying to give it a more innocent definition. Glad to see that it sorta worked.
Am really surprised this story has the rating it does. Last I checked it had like 2 favs and 8 likes/8 dislikes
Also:
Rainbow shipped with a ship