When Vic met Jennie

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Young and nerdy Pyrrhic Victory (just Vic preferred) feels lonely. Jennie Pie feels like she's wasting her life, even at her young age... yeeeeaaaah...

(First serious, published story. Be gentle.)

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BlueEricsson

BlueEricsson #1 · Oct 1st, 2011 · · · Chapter 1 ·

About to start reading, although i recomend you change your description. doesnt really make one to excited for the story, but ill give it a shot

Professor Donger

Professor Donger #2 · Oct 1st, 2011 · · · Chapter 1 ·

woah thats just woah!

Kawa

Kawa #3 · Oct 5th, 2011 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8352
You raise a good point, but I don't know what to put there... I should, though.

Kartac

Kartac #4 · Nov 14th, 2011 · · · Chapter 2 ·

9635 Trust me, I'm a bit bad at descriptions. Try to talk positively about what you've written and also maybe mention what the centerpoint of your story is going to be without giving away any spoilers.

Deoface

Deoface #5 · Dec 22nd, 2011 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Lets see.. What reason does Pinkie Pie have for throwing a party..
Oh wait.
Pinkie don't need no reason.
End story.

GlitchyProductions

GlitchyProductions #6 · Feb 18th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I'm useless at making descriptions, but I know that if you are writing a serious story then you should give it a very serious description. Vice Versa when you are making stories.

InoPony