For years, ponies have lived in harmony. For years, they had nothing to fear. For years, they believed that they were safe. They were wrong. A past race has returned to reclaim power in this world, and they bring with them the forgotten art of conquest. The art of War.
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I'm liking this so far.
A filly is a young female horse too young to be called a mare.
Learn2proofread.
Find an editor, goddamit.
The idea is good, but tis UnPoSsibL to rEed in CertAn pLaCis.
'Others were unsure of us, so they became the dragons, minotaurs, griffins, and dragons.' you should be carfull of repeating words
Well.....f!#@.images.nymag.com/images/2/daily/2010/01/20100114_hitler_190x190.jpg This is going worse then I have expected. Can someone give me a list of errors.
2579273 If you mean where the pirates spoke, it's kind of the point. Well, not really, but I want to make it more...... realistic.
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That part wasn't bad, actually. So, yeah. Look for an editor and a proofreader. There's plenty of groups out there willing to help people like you. You've got a talent, but your skill is lacking, you're on the right track, just find some help and keep working on it.
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And GOD, THAT PONYCREATOR ABOMINATION ON YOUR USERPIC. GET RID OF IT ASAP.
2588898 How about no. Look, if you don't like this guy, fine by me. But it's better then some random pony.
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He looks like an overpowered Gary-Stu-Red-and-Black-Alicorn OC, trust me, people don't like those. Especially if made in ponycreator.
Ahm jus' sayin.
2597033 I have a steam account, and people seem to like it just fine. It's your opinion, and I will respect it.....up to a point.
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Meh, have to agree there. There is ALOT of those Pony maker horrors out there, and frankly, I for one NEVER liked them one bit.
Hey the name for a male foal is colt and not bad. -buster
So griffins are worthless so only dragons should be able to stand up to them good thots tho I think that there should be at least one kind human. -buster
More! Pls!