In the past of the human and pony relationship, conflicts erupted and cold wars flared between their cultures. Both despise one another, to the point when the two species now live in their own societies on the opposite ends of the world. Discrimination is inevitable and barriers were created. But with innocence and a pure heart, a human and pony have bonded for the first time in their modern era.
Lola is a sky blue earth pony who is lost and seperated from her parents. As a pre-teenager, she is still unexperienced with the world beyond her home, not even having a cutie mark yet. What she is about to experience is that the human race is far different from what she has heard from other ponies.
Chapters (1)
You confuse your tense occasionally, going from past to present and back. Spelling and grammar are mostly good. Not bad for a first story, but could use some polish. Need an editor? Send me a PM.
Seems interesting. Will read...
Always been a fan of human pony friendshipping.
Ideally I'd love a full on species wide symbiosis like Anne McCaffrey's Talents series or the epilogue of Digimon's original series, but this is close enough I'm willing to give it a read despite the all OC cast and untagged AU.
2657370 Actually I already asked about the tense such as -ed and it is acceptable, depending on the action.
(love the name)
2657370 2657432 2657688 New blog on story status. Please, give it a read