Vinyl Scratch is fast becoming one of the more popular musicians on the scene. Finding this odd, the Royal Guard sends Angel Grace to investigate the unicorn and determine if she is using hypnosis to boost her popularity. She was prepared for nearly anything, but the truth behind the DJs rise to fame turns out to be more surprising than she thought.
This was initially a quickie I wrote for fun, but it turned out better than I thought it would. It's still unedited, so I may come back some time and clean it up a bit more.
Also I guess it's dark, so...there.
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Mmhmm...very interesting take on Octavia there, I like it!
Hands?
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I meant to mention that this is an anthro fic, sorry.
It started out as going in a different direction, and there's still hints of it in the story.
Very well done, I really liked how the hypnosis worked, how well it flowed. Octavia made for an excellent manipulator, setting everypony else's thoughts in order. Tuning them perfectly so that understand exactly what she says. I almost wish that you'd continue more with this, but I also want more progress on Lilith, you're very good at your writing style.
Have you thought about adding the dark tag?
Coz it creeped the buck out of me.
tis awesome and deserves more attention.
love it
Yeah, top detective suddenly quitting and moving to another town wouldn't raise suspicions at all. It looks like you were right about your Octavia. ^^;
Very interesting idea, can't wait to see more of this story.
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You know there's an anthro tag now, right?
This...was rather disturbing. You should add the dark tag, too.
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More?
I suppose I could think of more, but it was meant to be a oneshot.
2829850 Why would you stop this kind of story already, it has great premise.
Octavia does horrible things in order to garner the happiness of her friend Vinyl. I haven't seen an evil Octavia before.
I am seriously beginning to think twice about having Octavia as one of my favorites, and I am shuddering at how much I
felt I wasfeel I am in Angel Grace's position.new story/ sequel and includes vinyl octavia and celestia possibly other strong/important characters
Holy wow. I thought this was totally going in a different direction. Wow.
Okay, first off the premise was awesome. The whole mystery was very well done and the pay off was really well done. And the plot was actually pretty ingenious. I was impressed.
I thought this would be a romance thing, but it didn't and I'm glad it didn't. I also thought it would end with the character killing herself or something, but thankfully that didn't happen either. You see so many fan fictions that go that route that it is refreshing to see it just be a evil plot, but not a plot of a psychopathic serial killer. I was glad with the path that you took.
I'll be honest, I don't know that much about Octavia and Vinyl, but from what I saw here, it was pretty damn interesting.
Overall, a great story. A great mystery. And I can't wait to see more of you in the future. Take care.
Harmony is hypnotic.
That does explain a lot... but fantastic story and turn of events!
Very nicely done! I agree with the others... the hypnosis element was nicely subtle, and flowed really well with the rest of the story. This is a really good example of how MC fics don't have to be explicitly naughty. Everything clicked, if you'll pardon the atrocious pun. XD Hats off to you!
This was way better done than the one with Trixie and RD I've read before^^ I for once would really like seeing more chapters added to this, see how it all plays out^^
I liked your metod of hypnosis in this one too^^ nice and subtle, unescapable when you finally figure out what's going on. Very nicely done^^
Nice!
Short and to the point. It felt a bit more like a snippet than a fully story... but it certainly was an enjoyable one.
This is one of my favourite fanfics on this site, would it be ok to do a reading of it please? thanks.
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Be my guest. I really enjoyed writing it.
It's been recorded and will be edited soon!!
Wow... This is PERFECTLY executed! Can you make a bonus chapter about another pony who also goes through the same thing? Thanks! Also, you've just earned a follower!