Discord and Celestia are newly wed, and Luna doesn't like it, she has never liked Discord, and Discord has never liked her, she knows that he is up to no good, she is now forced to watch from her Moon-lit prison as Discord reigns chouas over Equestria....
Thanks to Bronyontheway for the cover picture! Look him/her up on Deviantart! You wont be dissipointed!
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meh pretty good u got a thumps up, a fav and a watch :P
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Thanks for not being to harsh like some otherponies have been. Ill update soon!
Thank you. Im working on improving my writing.
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Im sorry you don't like my story.. Is there any thing you think I can improve?
Im new, and im working on improving. Thanks for being truthful I suppose.
2711142 i can't wait 4 u to update this story! i know that some people can be harsh but dont let that get you down! this is an amazing story and I will suggest it to my friends.
although i must admit that the person under my first comment has been very harsh.
oh and im new to this site as well.
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Thanks love. I may start working now, the wheels have started turning.
>okey-dokey-lokey! ill keep reading! see u later!
hehe
Keep going! I can't take it! Waiting!!!
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So im bouncing ideas around.. Im glad you like it! 
I will soon. I have slight writers block.
Sadly, I wasn't impressed, it's definitely good, and I like the idea, but again, not really impressed. Sorry. Forgive me.
writers block sucks :P I know because im having it right now XP
nice story scary dream (shudders)
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Danke! I was going for that.
2733352 poor luna if that happened to her id be like WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!>
im working on my first totally random story ever. the only chapter will be called :Tail-Twitching; take it seriously XD
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Ill be sure to read it when I have spare time!
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Well at least let me tell you what happens. What happens is-
Hey! why are you on my computer Pinkie pie?!
Oops! My cover has been blown! I repeat my cover has been blown!(zips out of human outfit and gallops out of room)
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Stop braking the forth wall!
XD Win! Dammit Pinkie!
2733409 well anyway its re-
HEY!!! TELL THEM ABOUT THE STORY!!>
Pinkie Pie?! How did you even get on here?!
I like to watch my fanfictional self in stories>
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Don't worry Pinkie. Ill try and bring you in much later in the story, this was waayyy before you were born.
2733435 COOL!!!!!!!! (dances)>
(Whispers:I'm trying sooo hard not to laugh)
Hey! I heard that!>
ohh! I wonder what THIS button does(points at red button that says DO NOT PUSH)>
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-
(world blows up)
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Dammit Pinkie! Stop blowing the world up! Tell Fluttershy that her number one fan says hi when you go back to Ponyville. 
XD
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Does that count as saying hi?>
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Yup. Lol.
2733482 she was at a party when I found her XD okay! bye people of earth and hello Equestria! (Jumps into a hole in the ground and disappears.)
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More chapters please!
:) you get a moustache!
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Danke, I tried to add a few laughs there.
*reads discord and celestia are getting married* HOLY FUCKING SHIT!! *reads till the end* SEE CELESTIA NOT A GOOD HUSBAND!
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Haha, im taking that you enjoyed it eh? Im glad then.
It all makes sense now!
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Prepare yourself for tragedy! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! 
Haha.
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Aw, Moon Light sounds cute!!!!