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Fiddlesticks forgot to bring a dress for the Apple family square dance. She wasn't about to go without one, and she wasn't about to miss the opportunity to spend quality time with her family. Luckily, her cousin Applejack knows just the pony to help.

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Comments ( 13 )

Haven't read it yet, but will:pinkiehappy: It looks fun! (I skimmed right now:twilightsheepish:)

Adding to Fiddles group!:rainbowkiss:

Good on ya for writtin' one:heart:

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You are going to hate me so much after you read it.

2778709Pfft!:moustache: You don't killer her do you? No? Then I won't:raritywink:

I will read it. Too late in my timezone now, though. *yawn*:pinkiesmile:

I really like this interpretation of who Fiddlesticks is.

the one thing that should have struck her was when she mentioned her parent's were Joules and Staccato Melody and they asked if she was fiddlestick's sister, tells me that they knew about her parentage they just did not care

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You are absolutely correct. Sorry about that, I should have clarified it better.
The implication was that they didn't care where she was from, but how she acted. The problem with that is that I flat out wrote multiple times that she thought they cared about where she was from, so that's something I need to fix.
Thanks for bringing that up.

Loved it :) Great story, cheers!

Can't say I've seen this premise done before- and you did a fantastic job with it, too. Definitely deserves a favorite. :twilightsmile:

I liked it, but it kinda bugged me with the use of 'bails' instead of 'bales'.
It's probably just the hick in me (read: a good 64%) XD

"Ah like It!" a filly yelled behind me. I spun around to find the source of the voice, but it was lost in the mass of ponies.

I read that out loud in a southern accent as soon as I saw it. And I realized who it was before I kept going.

Nice story.

You’re cutie mark!” I turned to put my cutie mark out of view. “It’s a treble clef!”

It's supposed to be 'Your'. 'You're' in this sentence would mean "You are cutie mark"...and that doesn't sound right.

“So then that means I was right!” Rarity flaunted at me. “You’re family doesn’t care if you’re from Appleloosa or Canterlot or Bridgewater, as long as you are a good pony they’ll still accept you.”

Same thing here.

Otherwise, I'd say this was fairly good two-shot fanfic, with good writing and characterisation. Rarity's fangirling was entertaining, and Octavia/Fiddlestick was presented well. I'll give this a like anyhow.

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