"The servers are the seven chaos. Chaos is power, power enriched by the heart. The controller exists to unify the chaos." -Tikal, Sonic Adventure
Chaos is regarded differently wherever you go, some places it is praised and in others it is hated. Some associate it with miracles, others associate it with destruction. When 7 emeralds, that contain this energy known as chaos, are accidentally warped into Equestria by a certain purple unicorn; conflict over the emeralds between Mobians and Equestrians ensues. But will they both be able to keep the emeralds out of the possession of the entities that hunger for this power known as chaos?
Chapters (17)
its a good story, but i suggest an editor
2779444 heh heh, yeah that might a helpful sggustion.
as soon as i saw shadow say "did i say that i am the ultimate lifeform" i was saying the bitch going down hard cause shadow is teh most badass
2782843 yeah, i kinda am a Shadow fan, but for it to be a "balanced" story one of the characters from sonic's world is gonna have to go down as well, not shadow though...not yet.
Ok, im ready and interested to see where this goes.
2796558 I am trying to pump out chapters as fast as i can, but with travel coming up...well, we will see. i really like doing this so its gonna be on my list of things to do.
2796584 I hear you. I have a story on Fanfiction that i am planning to continue, and I just started it today actually. Check it out if you can
How bout making sonic doing the light speed attack on the ponies
2798523 wow, i never thought of that
. I'm trying to make it so each group of 2 appears at least once, however, i made a bit of an error in how many groups there were so i will have to re-use 2, so there is a chance that sonic will be making a re-appearance in the story...maybe with rainbow dash
279955 i just thought of that after reading the latest chapter XD also good work
2799921 thank you!
The story is getting a lot better dude.
2836833 thank you, one slight snag in the process of writing the story: my laptop (which is MY personal computer that I use cause I do not have a desktop) is now in need of a new recharger, kinda broke the half of the chord that plugs into my laptop. So in other words: my computer is fine but it has a 2 hr and 13 minuet life span on the battery alone, until I get, or if I get, a new recharger.
LIES! ONLY MALE HEDGEHOGS CAN USE CHAOS CONTROL! but, this is your story so you made it this way. and i have a question. i have a fanfiction on FanFiction, and do you think i should post it here. (I am CaptainAwsum if you want to see it)
2896802 but if you dont like pairings, then dont look at it
2896802 ill take a look at it, if it includes MLP, in it and meets this site's requirements maybe you should post it...ill take a look first
Again so far so good cant wait for more
2901725 thanks, i enjoy writing this!
CHAOS HAS RETURNED! Another great story, I see coming into view.
fight fire with fire. same with discord. fight retarded things with magical emeralds.
2903510 he he, yeah. I was going to leave that until near the end, but I decided that it would make more sense if it was done earlier.
2903930 Makes sense to me
2957431 thanks, I really enjoy writing this. though I'm having severe "writer's block" for how to stage a scene of combat between Rarity and Rouge. I know how rouge would fight but how would Rarity?
2957570 thats the problem. she would either buck or make rouges ears explode with high pitched whining.
2961349 Ouch, that second suggestion makes MY ears hurt just thinking about that!
I don't believe it. you made the girl a remain of the Solaris project. DO YOU REMEMBER HOW BADLY THAT WENT?!
2963783 call me a sonic 06' fan, I just like the name "Solaris", and yes sonic 06 was a horrible storyline. But hey, what can I say? The concept of a huge projects remains be a living thing, I find it really cool. Besides what harm could a girl who has two incredibly unstable powers at her command possibly do to be worse than Solaris, Well wait and read the story.
2965244 Well, call me a Sonic 06 fan as well, because when i first got it, i was nine, and the only thing that bothered me was all of the loading screens. and the whole point i got the game in the first place was to do the final story to play as the Super Forms of the Hedgehogs. And it was only when i played it a few years later when i noticed all of the problems.
2968081 I've never acctually played it but All I wanted was to listen to the Solaris phase 2 music, his world.
2971045 That is the whole point why i got the game in the first place.
i love it bad luck you stop whrithing
3061998 I'm not stopping yet, just experiencing some HUGE writer's block at the moment...I really do enjoy writing this story but school (for me) starts in about 1 or 2 weeks (
) so i'm worried as well.
2971055 still, there's a Sonic Generations conversion mod that makes Sonic Generations much like sonic 06', its still under development but its is incredibly detailed, i have played the Wave ocean demo, it made me ragequit, like it should have.
3062798 Yeah I downloaded that, but my computer doesn't have the right video card i guess, so the HUD doesn't show properly, but at least i can use other mods.
P.S. Have you seen my story yet? Just askin'.
3062868 I couldent find your name on Fanfiction
, so no i havent read you story yet, i will, if you give me a link or something...
3062878 Okay them, here it is.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9439686/7/
that goes to the new chapter
3065932 ive only been reading the story for a few minutes, but so far it looks great, keep up the good work!
Were-Hog. You messed that up. And, this is the second ongoing story that i have read that has the Werehog in it, which, honestly, i do appreciate. not many poeple who write in this kind of category put him in. And, Since you have an OC in here, you think you can put Unknown in the story? (If yes, then I prefer to be in Hedgehog form, but can switch at will).
Well, chapter gets 11/10 for Werehog. Great job and continue with this.
3073785 "Unknown" is that from your Fanfiction or somewhere else?
...oh well. i might if I get more info. Any who, the "were-hog" misspell was because i dont usually write stories or read them with that form in them.
Thank you for the kind words and i will continue to write whenever i get the chance. But i might get sloppy and skip and intro to Rouge v.s Rarity (if I ever write that part)...
3073785 Never mind what i said about this "unknown" character, i can put him in, it should'nt be too hard. (i read chapter 1 finnaly and that's how i now know who Unknown is
...i think 
...am i right? 
3074397
Unknown: Yup, that's me. I have a lot more powers than i show in the first chapter.
3077428 uh-huh...i read over your account info, you had your powers/abilities listed there.
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i hear so many things about a writers block what is it actually
like most people, You did a great job at portraying me well.
My personality changes on the situation, so serious if lives are involved, cocky when there's competition. and always hungry. there.
Unknown: Solaria may be fire, but i am time. i just don't use it very often.
Oh yeah, all of my form changes have a name. The one you put me in is literally called "Comedic Relief", though that's not the most accurate name.
3133465 heh thank you, I'll keep that in mind for chapter 11.
Sooo, still think i should post my story here?
I have two more i plan on working on, and i was definitely going to post them here as well, but should i put my fist one here?
3161254 well, you should make sure the stories meet the guidelines for writing stories/what you can post on FIMfiction, if they seem to follow the guidelines and requirements; then yes I do think you should post it here.
Wtf happened to this story? I'm lost first some one steal emeralds cliché figure starts and scheming know.... That I understand everything from the poit where cayos appered makes no sense. Sonic some how re absorbed dark gias energy and dark gia AND choas plus's that robot (I think its metal sonic) comes out of nowhere and tails Shadow and pinkie got in a cave even though tails was the only one kidnapped with some random girl what.the.fuck explain. Or mark the story as random. I'm lost bro. To many plot holes.