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Ghost(Simon) survived the murder attempt from General Shepherd. Now he must fight in order to get back home for his revenge.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 46 )

Wow. This is the first story that I've made thats gone negative. Hope that isn't foreshadow of whats to come.

I dont know why its negetive it is a good story some missspellings but thats it well good luck:twilightsmile::mo:rai:heart:nbowhuh:ustache::pinkiecrazy:

This is a good story but feels a little rushed. Maybe you could have him try to explain what happened and keep on getting interrupted, or you could make the fight a little longer. The main point is no "Russian" :pinkiehappy:

*slaps*

Ow! D:fluttershyouch:mnit Nightmare!

*slaps again*

Stop it!:fluttershyouch:

I plan for that later, were you learn his backstory as a child.:moustache:
Even though some people know about it.

Thats great. Well I have news. I had a big story planed out with this big battle and someone beat me to the punch. Theres is a bit different but people might say that I stole the idea. I'm still gonna do it, but hopefully people wont say that.

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Thank you. I plan to go back on the story to make it even better.

Comment posted by afterceasetoexist deleted Jun 30th, 2013

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Thanks. I love doing these kind of stories.
Makes me so happy to see people enjoy it.

By the by, wanks is wankers(A english term for idiots) and yanks are Americans.

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Working when I can, I have family in town. Even then I like to write chapters when the time is right. :pinkiesmile:

I like everything so far, my problem is that there's just sooo many COD crossovers coming out right now, most of them involving Ghost. Not something you yourself did, but I guess it's just coincidence. I just need a break from all the Ghost stories.

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I know, I was the second one to start that as far as I know. Please tell me if I'm wrong.
ALLONS-Y

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I'm not sure when it started or why. But like I said, you're welcome to the Ramirez idea if you want. I'd love to see it.
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That might be fun. Maybe get him a side story.

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I know, I've been thinking on changing that. The thing is that that would take me longer for each chapter.

the first time something sees you in equestria they attack you

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Of coarse. We would react the same way.

It might be a bit longer on the story. I've been so tired and busy lately.

:facehoof: The new Royal Guard captain must be a fucking moron, he didn't kill the guard, and he is being attacked for no reason. ei ei ei...

"We don't take kindly to aliens invading our land." said the raging guard.

Ok, I've seen fanfic ponies jumping to conclusions that seem realistic, BUT THIS IS FUCKIING REDICKULUS! Also, other then the Guards being at the upmost dunkoftsy I've ever seen, I like where this is going.

AND THE PRIME EXAMPLES THAT THE ROYAL GUARD DON'T JUST DO SQUAT WHEN FIGHTING, BUT ARE THE IDIOTS OF EQUESTRIA!
MOAR CHAPTERS!:flutterrage:

WTF why so short?

this is getting hilarious:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I am sorry about the length, it just takes some time to write with my crazy schedule.

another evil dead reference.

4076886 OH THE INCOMPETENCE! I CRINGE WITH THE FORCE OF ATHOUSAND SUNS!:fluttershyouch:

Hu......

Nope. I feel this story is too rushed and lacks build up. Needs a reboot ASAP. :ajbemused:

Pls do more this could be a great story if u finish it

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