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Royal Sisters

We often take are family for granted. much like anything in our lives. especially our own family. we never really know how much we miss someone until they are gone.

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NavalMilk

NavalMilk #1 · Feb 17th, 2012 · · ·

Very interesting premise, and taking the first person view is a bold step. I strongly recommend going through and editing things again, there are a few missing or misplaced quotation marks, as well as grammatical errors. The story has promise though, keep it up!

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??? #2 · Feb 18th, 2012 · · ·

very interesting

sh1v3r

sh1v3r #3 · Feb 18th, 2012 · · ·

228940 I apologize for the errors. My best ideas come when I am half passed out in front of my computer. Rest assured, I have an editor looking at this for me right now. A revised version should be posted on Sunday afternoon, along with the next chapter.

Khroam

Khroam #4 · Feb 18th, 2012 · · ·

Aside from the aforementioned errors this is a nice piece of work. I see where it's going, and I like that. Even if it were to be finished now it would make an apt description of the events prior to modern Equestria. Not to say stop writing it! I'll track this, but do try and be less passed out in front of the computer. It seems worse than it is, as this is good quality work. Nice idea.