The fruits of the Sea Devil himself appear in Equestria. They don't grow on trees, bushes, or vines, no, they are found on the ground. In mountains, in fields, in forests, and in cities. Only one pony knows what they are capable of, but once she finds out the first fruit has been eaten, it's too late. Will the Elements of Harmony be able to stop the greatest villain they have ever faced?
*Author's Note* The story is not tagged as dark, because it isn't, but ponies WILL BE KILLED. This is my agenda for ALL my stories, and this one is no different.
Chapters (3)
So RD is going to be captain of this element of harmony crew?
2848574 Not quite. She just knows more about what's going on at the moment. I won't spoil anything unless someone has a specific question and asks through a PM.
2848588 ah. But wouldn't know more qualify her to be the leader? Since she knows what's going on? Also will it spoil anything past the defeat of crocodile?
2848677 Yes it would qualify her to be the leader, but because of their friendship, they have an equal partnership. No one is the leader, they work together without guidance.
And when I mean spoil something, I mean spoil something in my OWN story. The whole story is already written, (skeletal form) so I know everything that's going to happen. So if you have a specific question about the future and want spoilers, I will answer it for you.
2848921 I just want to know if the story will mention anything other than the devil fruit, it's a yes or no question meaning no spoilers from the answer. Also I like your name.
2848921 Is
going to the only one out of the Mane Six to get a Devil Fruit power?
If so, that doesn't seem like equal partnership to me.
Well, that escalated quickly.
2849294 Then, yes.
2849371 No, she's not. But even so, she has no self control. Even with her Devil Fruit powers, Applejack could kill her.
*This does not mean Applejack will get a Devil Fruit ability, though it is a possibility.*
2850471Thanks.
2850461 cause i've only seen up to the defeat of crocodile in the anime, that's why I wanted to know.
spike should get the gura gura no mi.
Pinkie better eat the Gum Gum Fruit... if she eats one...
Either way this is going to be interesting...
2851499 You know, I thought that would be the one she would eat, if she eats one at all. But then, the Chop Chop Fruit and the Spring Spring Fruit also make sense! So, I haven't actually figured out which one she would eat, if she eats one.
2851226 The Tremor Tremor Fruit? Maybe if he was a bigger dragon, but, if he eats one, I was thinking it would make more sense if he ate the Munch Munch Fruit. Considering how much of a fatass he is when he sees food.
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I didn't even think of the Spring Spring Fruit, totally fits!
2853819 See? My dilemma of which fruit should she eat, if she even eats one, has become even worse!
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Man that is a hard choice... you should really think about it...
Hey, remember, when a fruit user dies, the fruit is reborn into the world. So those three that DT and SS had are still out there.
2855202 Oh, I know, but, the Mane 6? They DON'T know.
2855257 So...Zoan is my favorite type of fruit. What's yours?
2856085 Logia. For me, it's kind of a tie between the Syrup-Syrup Fruit and the Rumble-Rumble Fruit.
But I do like Zoan, as well. If I had to pick a Zoan, it would be the Bird-Bird Fruit: Falcon Model.
I don't have any prefence for the Paramecia, though. They tend to be weaker.
2856212 Eh, Paramechia are my number two simply because they're so hard to predict. You've seen one Zoan or Logia, you've seen them all so to speak, but each Paramechia is a whole new beast.
2858991 I'd say that's only partially true. Remember that most Logias are about the same power. But the most powerful Devil Fruit there is is a Logia, the Tremor Tremor Fruit.
So, in a sense, you haven't seen them all. You've got a good feeling for how strong your opponent is if he's a Logia user, until you fight Whitebeard, then you're screwed and you totally underestimated your opponent.
2859411 The Tremor Tremor Fruit is Paramechia.
2859424 Oh wow, you're right. I could've sworn I read somewhere it was Logia, but it's Paramecia.
Have Spike find either the Mera Mera no mi (Flame Fruit) or the Magu Magu no mi (Magma Fruit)
Applejack or Big Mac should get the Gura Gura no mi (Tremor Fruit)
Fluttershy should get the Tori Tori no mi, Model: Phoenix
Lyra the Hito Hito no mi (Human Fruit)
....okay what the fuck? Celestia ordering them killed? That's just...no.
2870315 That's just...yes.
Remember, even in the world of One Piece, Devil Fruits are feared by most humans because of the problems they cause.
A more gentle race like the ponies would consider them a large threat, as well. Celestia understands as well that all of her subjects, including her, are susceptible to greed.
With great power, (such as that from a Devil Fruit) enables greed to be acted upon more violently.
Ex. You wouldn't rob a bank with a knife, but with a gun, it's much more likely you'll succeed.
Same thing here. So Celestia has decided, as a ruler of her people, that's it's better to save the many, by sacrificing the few.
Dude! At least add a Dark Tag! Even if it's for "good reason"... she making them kill ponies! I mean when you just have Crossover/Adventure, everyone's going to think it's a light hearted adventure like Canon!
2870385 I would, but it's not dark. Dark would be more like vampires, werewolves, that kinda stuff.
This IS an adventure. Think about it: it's no different from the LOTR; they killed shit on their journey, too. But that's not dark.
Sorry, I can't label it that way.
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"Dark would be more like vampires, werewolves, that kinda stuff."
Do you even know how the Dark Tag works? Here's the descption on the FAQ about the Dark Tag (Or Grimdark as they call it, it needs to be updated)
"Grimdark is for when you want to write a story that’s a few shades darker than the feel of the show. In these fics, there is gore and violence and swearing – well, not always. You’ll see variations like Dark and Grimlight around a lot, because no-one can agree on exactly what this tag is actually supposed to mean."
In other words, being forced to murder ponies is under the dark tag.
2870408 Not forced, she asked them to do it. Obviously, the Mane 6 could have denied the mission, and she would've given to someone else.
Nothing was forced. Plus, I would only use dark if the killings are gone into EXTREME detail. I didn't even mention blood in my killing!
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They're still killing ponies! Even if they were asked to and not forced they're still doing it!
I'm leaving this on favs just because I want to see where this is going... but at least warn in the description that there's going to be murders if you refuse to add the dark tag!
Wonder how long the promise of not eating the fruit will last. Also, if fluttershy gets anything other than the whisper-whisper fruit, I will be disappointed.
2870462 Fair enough. I will put it in the long desc. that ponies will be murdered.
2870463 Eating the Whisper Whisper Fruit is meaningless. It would take away her ability to swim, and give her nothing. Why should she eat it?
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Fair enough.
Oh and I have a question: Is the last chapter going to be about them killing Rainbow Dash?
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2870546 Yeah, that's kinda a major pothole I thought of in 5 seconds. My response if I was RD would have been "wait, that means Celestia might have me killed too. Screw this."
2870325 Dude, that's just Dark. You need to add that tag. Also, your logic is flawed. I own three guns, but I have zero criminal inclinations, because I'm moral. And if a human can be that moral, imagine the morality of the pastel ponies! Hell, in real life such killings would be met with outrage, especially if the victims weren't doing anything wrong.
This is a dark story and you so did not warn us.
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He sent me a PM about certain spoilers... I won't say what they are... only I unfaved it and switched to a thumbs down.
2870922 I never said that owning a gun would make you want to rob a bank! I was saying that if you had a knife, it would be harder to threaten for money, since the security guards would have guns. So if you had a gun, it would be easier for you to rob a bank.
It was just an analogy, and had NOTHING to do with guns, literally.
Also, I questioned a moderator about my story, and he SPECIFICALLY told me the story WAS NOT dark. Killing isn't dark, it's a natural part of life that happens everyday, everywhere. With cartoon ponies, it's no different. But even so, I have placed a warning in the long desc. People will know BEFORE they read the story and get butt-hurt about it.
Will any Devil Fruit users be able to join the group, like in One Piece?
2871807 Unlike my last story, I'm not going to unleash any spoilers, even if asked. I've already answered someone's question regarding that, and they disliked and unfaved my story because of it.
Let the story unfold, and see what you think of it.
But I will tell you this: in the anime, it's said there are 'over 100 Devil Fruits'; implying there aren't more than 199 (otherwise, they would just say 200).
So, I'm going to put 150 Devil Fruits in the story; the original 108 mentioned so far, plus my own creations.
That's all i'm willing to give up, I'm sorry.
Cool.
2870540 it would improve her natural talents. It's the same thing as a human eating the human-human fruit that chopper ate. If I remember correctly from something I read about it, it would still affect a human, just not as much as it would an animal.
2873668 No, it wouldn't affect her natural talents. What you're thinking of, is when a human eats the Human-Human Fruit, they become enlightened. Whatever that means, I don't know; it's never specified.
If Fluttershy ate the Horse-Horse Fruit, the same thing would happen - she would become enlightened. However, you're talking about the Whisper-Whisper Fruit. In that case, nothing would happen because she ALREADY can speak to animals and understand what they say.
She would get nothing out of it except losing the ability to swim.
2874357 remember a bird in the hoof? She didn't understand what angel was trying to tell her at first. Meaning she doesn't always understand animals. The whisper whisper fruit would fix that.
2875093 It's not that she didn't understand what he was trying to tell her; it's just that she forgot about the brunch she was supposed to have with her friends.
Plus, he wasn't really 'telling' her anything. He just kept pointing at a watch; that's very childish, and would have been hard for anyone to understand.