Sirlen always wanted to be a royal guard but was pulled out because his skills were in a different way of fighting. He was trained to be a sleuth. The unseen protector in many ways. He has always been able to do his job until an unknown threat entered his home land. Then suddenly thrown into a land of talking horses er... ponies? Can he go home? Does he want to?
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I read this out loud. I hope you don't mind, but I'm posting the video to YouTube in a few minutes and I'm posting it here in the comments as well.
Dere.
If I'm being a dick, don't worry, it gets better.
2867191 Hey glad you liked it. Sorry about the grammar though. I don't know how to get an editor, and yes this is an original. Ps what possessed you to do a reading of this? It hasn't even been up three days.
Hello, I have now read your first story (no duh!). My opinion: I like the idea,and it could be even better with some serious formatting and editing. I would be happy to do so, however I can not understand how to edit on this site.
3516388 how I have done it in the past is I have emailed them a copy of the story they fix it and then I fix it on the site I did that with the first two chapters of this story but then my editor started to have some troubles of his own so only the first two chapters got edited. Thank you for reading, and as I said hearing feedback is always a pleasure. ps this story will get action just a little later it is slow now but I plan for it to go far.
3726225 thanks for the advise PS this story is sadly pending at the moment