Lucky number Thirteen

by SkyShrieker

Danger! Under Construction!

Author's Note:

Soon, soon.

Comments

[Vates Despero]

I realized that drinking helped with creativity (not so much punctuation and what have you) that I might need to work on that.

Um... that is literally what editors are for.

[DAT GUY]

3923675 Editors: The Sober Authors

[stormscorpion]

3923675 I'm supposed to be his editor but he stopped sending me emails

[Praetorian]

While I am not happy with this, you are the author and have final day. This is your story after all. So I guess I'll await your updates to the best of my ability.

[Secondchancer]

Yes drinking does help good job with that and good luck :-P

[fasterninja]

what type of drinks you drinken not alcohol i hope you could become a alcoholic

[chrismonteith]

good luck man

[StardustSurvivor]

just finished chapter 4. cloud district? really? theres no possible way you did not steal that from skyrim.

[SkyShrieker]

When I decided to go with cloud district I was thinking of the constant flow of travelling merchants, majority of which are pegasi, just like the clouds in the sky. And in Skyrim the Cloud District is where the elites and the Karl live. In my Canterlot that is the Platinum, or the most expensive and sophisticated of the three districts.

[masterblotart]

how long you going make next chapter?

[Underpaid Carronade]

I'm a bit confused while reading a bit. Has he been turned into a pony or is it some hybrid?

[BATCAN]

Um....I....uh...
what the FUCK!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
so confused.....

[masterblotart]

planning do more chapter?

[SkyShrieker]

Hey Y'all. I know it has been multiple years but I want to state something. Yes, more chapters are coming. I don't want to bore you with the details but life happened. Now I am almost ready to begin writing again. I will be redoing my older chapters, updating and adding a few more stories soon. So look forward to it if you enjoy and I am terribly sorry this has taken so long. Look forward to the to the ongoing story of Leuma and i will see you all soon.

[Neutral Boy]

7427787 Aw man, I wanted to see more of this story.

[AFestiveTaco77781]

Ahh man. I really wanted to see the rest of this story. It was so interesting

[TheUndeadEmpire]

RIP.

[Fallingraptor19]

chosen of the great horned rat! yes-yes!

[KarasAdamas]

Did the author die? He hasn't been here since 2016. RIP

[Max hunter]

Dude..... I need this update to survive you can't leave me like this