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Bysen


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Fluttershy and Applejack are coming up on their one month anniversary and Fluttershy thinks it's about time they tell everypony about themselves. They know their friends will accept them but AJ's a little worried. Mostly because a while ago their friends had come up with some stupid idea that AJ and Rainbow Dash had been seeing each other and that hadn't ended well.
Also Scoota/Dash friendshipping. And just a head up, the Scoota/Dash story takes over towards the end.

New chapter ever Saturday! Completed!

This is a prequel to Happy Anniversary Sug and by prequel I mean flashback chapter that was never published due to quality control and it didn't necessarily fit in. Since then I've fixed it up and it's much better than it was. [and about twice as long]

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Comments ( 29 )

It would seem Dash is confused and cannot comprehend why Fluttershy would do such a thing.
But I don't know, it just seems that way.
Confusion is usally followed by anger depending on the proplem. Or... Im wrong, which in any case would be true.

good chapter

This is an awesome story, but please STOP F*CKING WITH MY MIND.

3168898 hahaha... never going to happen!

A what princess?

Comment posted by Bysen deleted Sep 8th, 2013

Sweetie Belle has a coltfriend?

3177920 Pretty sure I mentioned it in chapter 2. It was either Snips or Snails... I forget which.
It's actually a pretty irrelephant fact... and yet oddly it's actually explained [briefly] in the last chapter.
Also, you accept the Apple/Shy :ajsmug::fluttershysad: part but the premise of a girl having boyfriend is shocking? :unsuresweetie: Dis fandom... SHIP ALL THE LESBIANS!
:facehoof::duck:
:rainbowwild::pinkiegasp:

Where's Winona?

Misspelled Carousel Boutique.

omg the ending with scoots leaving made me cry :fluttercry:

3200294 You have no idea how happy it makes me to hear that! :raritycry::raritydespair:

That was so sad :fluttercry:, yet it felt like the right way to end it. Marvelous job :twilightsmile:

i reaaaalllllly hated coming out. i can relate.

This chapter just feels like... Apple Bloom got into a semi-drunk rage or something... Its not like her to act way out of character.

How did this Fluttershy and Applejack shipping turned into a Scootaloo fiction? I now can understand why the dislike bar is high...

3233359 I was trying to portray Applebloom more as a child getting angry over something she doesn't like. She is only... 8? after all.
As for the change at the end: this was originally part of a bigger story, just a flash back in it though, and didn't quite work out so was changed to semi-standalone.
As for that being the reason for the dislike, you'd think so but no. The majority of them came in before Dash was even introduced which really makes me wonder... the start of the story's not that bad is it?

3244095
The problem comes most from Apple Bloom. In the show, she is shown that she and the crusaders are mature enough to not talk about this.

Making Apple Bloom act out of character affects people reading it. I suggest you shouldn't try making other characters act against their own traits and attitude, unless you have a strong reason why the character has changed so much.

seariously? a black princess? XD JAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJA ooooo granny Smith you little racist old hag :rainbowlaugh: jajajajaja

so many things and im still thinking about the lamp XD jajajajajaja

“Ever since we got a black princess we been getting all these gay rights and socialised hoof-care!”

:rainbowlaugh:

Laughed so hard on this one.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by TrueBlueTardis deleted Jan 22nd, 2014

3177920 Actually... I think I'll change it from snips to Button Mash.

I've been in the fandom for over 3 years at this point... and this is the first AppleShy shipfic I've ever come across...

Comment posted by superfun deleted Jun 15th, 2016

7302206 Really?
And I'll look into it.

7302997 Yeah.
More often than not, the romance fics I've come across that involve either AJ or Flutters have them shipped with RD.

7303343 So I was fixing up those mistakes you mentioned when all of a sudden I started laughing uncontrollably at Rainbow Dash's "I kinda had thing for Fluttershy’s brother" :rainbowlaugh:

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