Three years and Vinyl Scratch still feels the pain. Wanting to make it better, she would do anything to get back her Tavi. Even if she has to give up dubstep
Insanity is only those of the vivid imagination
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I shall be the deciding factor on whether or not you go positive or negative.
Good story! Little short though, still a like however!
Well...that was...okay.
It was too darn fast to be good, but the plot and ideas were too good to be bad. I'll like it, but I don't think I'm gonna fav.
Short n sweet but I like longer stories but this is good can't....... handle it! *head explodes*
her heand ran down Tacos thigh lol. i liked it u got my fave and like
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Decent set up. The memories could be italicized or seperated with a page break to show that it's not current. But other than that it's good .
"It has been six years since I did this, but I'm switching from dubstep for a song a switching to something more smooth." She waited for this shock to die down before continuing. "Ladies and gentlponies, enjoy."
You can get rid of the "a switching", since you already state that you're switching from something to something else.
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The time jumps happen a little quickly, and some parts feel like they could be expanded upon, but all in all there's nothing bad with them. Just that they flow to quickly without telling how long things have progressed until much later on in a chapter.
crap.
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Decent fic. rushed, but decent.
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It was my first one so it has a good amount of errors
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Well for a first fic, it wasn't too bad. You've grown by leaps and bounds since this story.
Stop calling Tavi "Taco"
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This was back when I wrote on my phone
When you find time, I do hope you are going to go back and fix all the errors. I've 'liked' and 'favorited' this in hopes that you do.
I. Am. Dying.