When Applebloom is sick in bed, she asks Applejack to read her a story. Not having any books to hand, Applejack decides to invent a story for her, in the style of Just So Stories.
I live in the UK, and have been at university in Devon since September 2011. My home is near London, and I first started watching My Little Pony in February 2011.
When Applebloom is sick in bed, she asks Applejack to read her a story. Not having any books to hand, Applejack decides to invent a story for her, in the style of Just So Stories.
Such a nice story. Will you be adding more to it? Tracking if you are.
Well done. Origin stories are always a bit of a gamble, but this one worked out very well.
Nice,
only thing is that I felt a little lack of flow at the beginning of the story.
Well done.
I wish I could write applejack's accent
I approve of this
THis was pretty good
Ponyfiction + Rudyard Kipling stories?
In my opinion, this should be featured.
But the best layed plans....
Ah well. Next I'm half expecting the Pasture Book or Gelding Din!
D~aw!
that was really good
I really liked this! I didn't expect the whole 'fell in love with a cloud' thing at all. Plus, Granny Smith at the end made me smile
Tracking!
240843 Glad you liked it. Yes, I will, when I think of more stories for Applejack to tell
I'd love to see sequels where AJ tells her version of Equestria's history.