• Member Since 3rd May, 2013
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Marbles life was good as a foal, but when school started things got hectic. She was bullied by diamond tiara and silverspoon. Lets follow her as she goes through her life.

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It looks like you need some help with your punctuation.

When your you're a foal, and your you're born with a black coat

Lets Let's follow Marble Trays Tray's life as a black coated black-coated foal.

Thanks for helping. :) I'm dyslexic so it's a little hard for me to write story's and have them look like they're written ok. I'll fix that soon

Thank you!! It's my best story yet. I may be dyslexic but that doesn't mean I can have fun and write stories.

3593229 Your welcome and ok

3593229 maybe you could get a pre-reader to help fix your mistakes? i could do it

flame5768 yeah that'd be great, how would i do that?

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