Marbles life was good as a foal, but when school started things got hectic. She was bullied by diamond tiara and silverspoon. Lets follow her as she goes through her life.
Marbles life was good as a foal, but when school started things got hectic. She was bullied by diamond tiara and silverspoon. Lets follow her as she goes through her life.
It looks like you need some help with your punctuation.
Thanks for helping. :) I'm dyslexic so it's a little hard for me to write story's and have them look like they're written ok. I'll fix that soon
i like it
Thank you!! It's my best story yet. I may be dyslexic but that doesn't mean I can have fun and write stories.
3593229 Your welcome and ok
3593229 maybe you could get a pre-reader to help fix your mistakes? i could do it
flame5768 yeah that'd be great, how would i do that?