100 years after the Gardens of Equestria activated, the New Equestrian High Council has maintained peace throughout the nation. Now that there is peace, one ambitious creature wants to rebuild. Only, he wants to rebuild and entire species.
He can not do this alone. With permission from the High Council itself, he has taken with him, two ponies from the military. They will travel through lands still wild, and even lands not explored for a millenia.
looks good so far but could be a little bit longer
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Trust me, I have a tendency to improve chapter length over time by 3X the earlier chapters.
And thanks
Very good
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THank ye kindly good sir or madame
It's looking pretty good. Could do with a little more detail and slightly better pacing, but pretty good.