• Published 25th Feb 2012
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My Little Apple Pie - Jeremy Llama



This is a story Based on Apple Jack and Inspired by the Story "My Little Dashie"

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Chapter 2 The Continuation

I'm following some elements from "My Little Dashie" this is one of the other reasons why I didn't want to publish this it's so similar to My Little Dashie I felt like I was copying it. I'm not of course, anyways I hope you like this. If you spot any errors feel free to tell me I'm sure I have a lot of typos -.- oh well. Enjoy!

Hooray fixed grammar and spelling problems in this one!


~Chapter 2~
I tried five more times until I gave up and looked inside the hood of my car. When I opened it a huge puff of black smoke came out.

"JUST GREAT!" I screamed

Forgetting about the little orange pony in the car and the attention I could've gotten, but luck was on my side, no one was close by to hear it so that's good. I remember the orange pony and go to get her out. I opened the door slowly, painfully aware that there was nothing I could do to get my car fixed because of this orange pony. I got her out and closed the door quietly and make sure to lock the doors of my broken down car.


I got out of there and headed for home. It's a saturday so it'll probably be a bit more lively out, luckily I know a shortcut so It'll also make it easier to get by unnoticed. I know the shortcut from another time when I was running from some thugs trying to get me thankfully I was able to get away and get to my house I finally got home it felt like an eternity. I then put the box down and pulled out my keys and unlocked the door, but just my luck, I dropped the keys right on the box. I stayed silent, still, and tried to think of what to do next. Everything around me fell silent not a sound not even my old broken down house and it's damn creeking was even making a sound. It was as if the whole world around me just faded off, it as so strange it was as if my life just moved some where different, to a new dimension.

"What is going on here?." I thought to myself but somehow it was so....quiet to hear myself think. I was brought back to life when I heard the box. Every thing sprung back to life my house was making it creeks I heard my neighbor leaving, I heard the wind....

"Wait... It wasn't windy minutes ago... " I said to myself quietly

I then remember that the orange pony was awake in the small box. I then saw dents burst out the side of the box until two holes appeared. The box nearly tipped over from the power of the kicking. I managed to come back to reality again and got closer to open the box. I opened it. Inside was the orange pony looking scared and confused, but ready to fight back if necessary.
I'm sorta at a loss of words but I managed to sputter out.
"Um... hello?"
She looked frightened now probably because of my size compared to hers.
I said
"It's ok I'm not gonna hurt you. Come on inside it's cold out here."

I saw her loosening up, so I picked her up and brought her inside. She did squirm a bit until I put her down. She looked at me with trust but still ready to go on the offensive if necessary. I started to notice her more she was shivering so I grabbed the blanket I used to sleep in last night then I put it on her she did kinda flinch until she knew that her head was poking out.

I didn't sleep well last night because the couch wasn't exactly the best place since it was cold and was pretty hard almost like a rock unless you're sitting down.

Anyways I went to the kitchen to see if there was anything good I could give to her I can't really think of much that she could eat. She's from a cartoon, she's a filly, and as I was thinking about what she could eat and couldn't eat, I looked in my fridge and saw it was empty besides some sodas, but those are drinks and not food. I looked for some food but I only saw the drinks and some crescent rolls. Not only would the crescent rolls take too long to cook I also don't know if the dough would be good for her to eat. Although that's a stupid thought of course she can't. I began thinking where close by food would be. I remembered the apple tree outside.

"That wouldn't be bad would it?." I said quietly.

I went outside and grabbed an apple when I came inside and looked at the orange filly, she was asleep. For some reason I was tired too. But then again, I did have alot going on that made my heart pump fast. I went to the other couch laid down and fell asleep. How I managed to go to sleep after all this crazy stuff happened is beyond me. I woke up maybe three hours later? Anyways I felt something soft, warm and moving slowly. I opened my eyes and there I saw was the orange little pony and she was sleeping right next to me.

"She was probably cold and uncomfortable." I said in my mind. Although I knew that wasn't the reason I just wanted to make up an excuse for this.
She looked so peaceful and warm. So cute..... Then I felt something I hadn't in a long time. Happiness.