Hey, everypony. I'm a young writer. I'm not the most talented, but I'm getting there. I would like anybody to help me out by being my editor and/or co-writer. Any and all help is appreciated.
The past should not be forgotten, note should it blind us to what the future may hold. With the new change in statuesque between ponies and their new channeling neighbors, the past may be the answer to help set an understanding.
A human appears in Equestria, seemingly under the control of Queen Chrysalis. Can he break her grip on him before he is forced to stain his own soul with evil?
The Mad Queen took everything from Broken Heart; Her husband, her kingdom, even her name. Convinced His Love is a lie, she goes to Him, and denounces His Truth.
Forced to leave her peaceful hometown and flee for her life alongside a mysterious orphan filly named Primrose, New Equestrian war-veteran Scarlet Frost will have to use every resource at her disposal just to stay alive.
Woah dude. First of all, it's a credit to you that a hetero guy like me read that gay rape section all the way through. Second of all, nice job with the rest of it too, very well written. Lastly, that ending, woooah!
3181451 Thank you. And, if you don't mind, could you pass this around? I would like to get more feedback so I could learn how to improve and see what people want to read. Any help is very much appreciated.
3189784 yeah sure thing. If you're into grimdark you might like my story My Little Princess. No sex but it's dark. Ill do a little share for share if you like!
Ending: Oh shit. Someone plz continue this, I'm not a good writer.
Woah dude. First of all, it's a credit to you that a hetero guy like me read that gay rape section all the way through. Second of all, nice job with the rest of it too, very well written. Lastly, that ending, woooah!
Very nicely done
3181451 Thank you. And, if you don't mind, could you pass this around? I would like to get more feedback so I could learn how to improve and see what people want to read. Any help is very much appreciated.
3189784 yeah sure thing. If you're into grimdark you might like my story My Little Princess. No sex but it's dark. Ill do a little share for share if you like!
3190323 Thank you. I may check it out sometime.
This is quite the story. One of these days we should colaborate