• Member Since 3rd Sep, 2013
  • offline last seen Jun 2nd, 2022

McSlendy


Nothing to see here, folks. Now move along. Hey, I'm being serious. Go on already. Leave. Go away, shoo!

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One moment, Big Macintosh was sitting on a stool in Twilight's library. The next, he's in the middle of a war between two mercenary teams, thanks to her spell. Follow Mac as he deals with being a human, makes new friends and enemies, and ultimately, tries to become a stallion again.

The coverart belongs to masteryeah037 on Deviantart, meaning I don't own it, nor have I asked him his permission to use it... Yeah, I should do something about that. Go to his profile and shower him with all your appreciation if you like his art - if you're lucky enough, he may draw some stuff for you.

26th of June 2014: Going through massive chapter updates and edits. Wish me luck.
5th of January 2015: Oh God, why am I so slow at this? Going through another massive updating phase of my story alongside a few edits here and there. Again, wish me luck.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 16 )

welp time for hoovys and heavys to fist fight :pinkiehappy:

good luck with to story dear writer i hope you get lots of likes

Welp, it's time to see where this goes. :moustache:

A bit of advice: You're doing a lot of telling with your writing style. You may want to try and show a bit more, giving more description and detail with your writing. :twilightsmile:

I'll see what I can do. Thanks for the info.

To answer your question. Something wonderful!

I bet you Big Mac is going to be cloned or be a vsh hale... :D

Now BLU will need a clone of him.

Hm what is he going to choose....

The Pyro would be the one to know where Big Macintosh is from.

You think your writing skills are bad...
You should read my fic when I get to putting it on here xD

You're doing a very good job for now :-)

Reading up to this point, I say it's pretty good. Better than I'd ever hope to be. I'm very curious on how Macintosh will see his family again, and how the Administrator is going to manipulate the BLUs and REDs in order to keep their conspiring identities a secret. Other than that, you, sir, deserve another like and fav. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by The electric bomber deleted Jan 7th, 2015

Enjoying this so far, even though it's been since 2013 that it's updated.
Though, telling by your profile, it does say you're active. So I do hope you'll continue this.

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