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Grey Faerie


An amatuer writer who loves Pinkie Pie and Discord.

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Discord and Pinkie sing songs for different reasons.

First chapter, they fill in for the singers for Hearts and Hooves day.
Second chapter, Discord dances around the kitchen.
Third chapter, Pinkie bugs AppleJack.
Forth chapter, Twilight narrates the craziness.
Final chapters, Discord's Birthday party.
Extra chapter, is a rewriting of The Cell Block Tango from Chicago. Be warned as it does allude to sexytime and murder.

Woo, TheExhaustedBrony did a recording of the first two chapters. Go check them out!

Pic from Kman-Studio on deviantart

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 31 )

That was such a pretty story. Made my day. :) thanks.

Now that was a fun read! If you wouldn't mind, I'd love to do a recording of this.

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Sure, just send me a link when you're done. :pinkiehappy:

So am I right to assume that this is considered foreplay for these two?

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I think this is definitely a form of foreplay for those two. lol :twilightblush::rainbowlaugh:

3363014 Then I can only imagine how their sex life goes...

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It'll probably be more fun than we will ever know.

3363058Those lucky, crazy, chaotic, bastard. xD

humorous site of Discord dancing

should be "sight"

They'll always changing or so random.

that should be "They're", and this seems like an odd complaint coming from the god of chaos.

I do. It's just that the origin and meaning are kinda...eh. If you really think about it, it's a holiday about how we either got to be nice to each other or be killed by windigos.

:rainbowlaugh:

Who is this mysterious pony? All we know is that she is female referred to as "Gray". :rainbowhuh:

All she knew was Fluttershy had told her was Discord,

The second "was" shouldn't be there.

Pinkie's grumpy friend Grey Faerie were out on a picnic.

well that sort of answers my question from last chapter.

As Twilight neared her destination, she hear music.

should be "heard".

I knew she'll be boring

should be "she'd".

But just when I went to sit down,

What happened to Twilight narrating in third person? :rainbowhuh:

I really enjoyed your singing." Twilight remarked.

periods at the end of a quote become commas.

I'm here up you guys

should be "but" not "up".

The links at the end don't work.

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Huh, the links work for me. Thanks so much, you don't how helpful it is for me to have all the mistakes found. I could read this over and over and still not see a misspelling :twilightblush:

Also, the third to first person narration change is just Twilight not being used to narrating. I should probably have Discord or Grey point that out.

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The complaint about holidays might seem odd coming from Discord, but I see it as he's thousands to who-knows-how-many years old. He's seen so many different holidays it has become annoying trying to keep them in order. Like, he'll come over to celebrate a holiday, only to find it changed. Think of how much Halloween has changed in the last hundred years.

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Grey's my OC. She's mainly to help the story along. I didn't really want to get into her story as much because I know some people are if-y about that.

3623098 Wait you mean you're not a pony?

Comment posted by Super Trampoline deleted Dec 14th, 2013
Comment posted by Super Trampoline deleted Dec 14th, 2013

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I don't need to cosplay. I have the power to transform into many different forms. Usually a shadow form or silhouette of a creature, but for now I'm pretending to be a human so I could tell you people about my time on Equestria.

Glad that you put the little footnotes for the references there :twilightsmile:
Also...

"Play with fireworks?"

Funny thing... I actually have a friend on this website (and DA) whose Ponysona's name is actually Fireworks... So I got confused for a moment...:applejackconfused::twilightsheepish:

THIS is the song...

The song of my people.

3623429 Umm... You being legit about this? I can believe ponies and changelings and bad*** Spartans like myselfandohmygodI'mroleplayinginthecommentssomeonehelpme

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Haha, you like it then? I hadn't been sure about posting that particular chapter.

5171561 I... I don't even know anymore. I hurt my head... But yeah, you do a good job.

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Well, I'm really glad you like it!

no no no. Flutershys lines do not work they are in perfectly understandable English. That girls testimony is the hardest to write in this world because there are no known foreigners we can write in. your best bet is Fleur Dis Lee or the Lotus twins speaking french. That girls deal is that she is foreign and since they do not understand she cannot get out of the accusations. Put the current lyrics in parenthesis and translate them to I don't know Hungarian?

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