When Soldat Conrad Schmidt of the German 6th Army is shot by a sniper during the Battle of Stalingrad, he is sent to Equestria.. However, it isn't the Equestria we all know and love.
I love it!
Fucking soviets you are not better tgan a bunch of rabid horny dogs!XD
6713711 Toppus Kekkus
WIthin seconds, Soviet soldiers
a loud noise, weather it be a
I could have sworn there was one more, but I can't find it.
Great story though, can't wait to read the next chapter
6722534 Thanks for the input! These parts have now been fixed, and it should be good now!i really need an editor >.>
his dreams were haunted him every time he closed his eyes.
- remove ''were''
Timed seemed to slow down Unteroffizier Hessler screamed for his squad to open fire and reached down to grab Conrad to pull him to safety.
- I think a period is missing in this phrase, ''Time seemed to slow down.''
Other then this the first chapter is off to a good start, keep going.
6788694 Thank you for the advice, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
i love this story i hope you continue writing this story by blood god i hope you do
I love it!
Fucking soviets you are not better tgan a bunch of rabid horny dogs!
XD
6713711 Toppus Kekkus
I could have sworn there was one more, but I can't find it.
Great story though, can't wait to read the next chapter
6722534 Thanks for the input! These parts have now been fixed, and it should be good now!
i really need an editor >.>
- remove ''were''
- I think a period is missing in this phrase, ''Time seemed to slow down.''
Other then this the first chapter is off to a good start, keep going.
6788694 Thank you for the advice, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
i love this story i hope you continue writing this story by blood god i hope you do