After an experiment had gone horribly wrong, three fillies set out for an adventure to find a cure for their best friend with the help of Zecora's instructions but when the three fillies find out that Zecora's not home, how will they cure their friend from her illness?
I like it so far, but try to put more paragraphs! o3o And if it's a new speaker, try making it a new paragraph. From your friendly neighborhood
SpidermanMidnight.I like it a lot and I'm going to agree with midnight, you're paragraphs do need to be spaced with your dialogue. What I took away from it left me smiling. I can't wait to read more. o3o= I'm going to guess a warepony. ( I would've said vampire, but vampires don't have reflections.)
Great job sweatheart.
3264570 I think I failed But I guess it's good o3o I'll try to fix that, in the mean time have a Xia while you read the next chapter
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3264467 I tried but I'm too lazy
Here, have a Xia while you read the next chapter
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3265397 HNNGNGGG!
I cans be ur editorz?
3269551 Sure
3274736 YAY! Just send me the chapters in PM or make a gdocs account. I can help you either way!