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TwilightSparkleForever


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Everyone says Ice Petal should be a researcher when she grows up. A scholar. A politician. Something more fit for an unicorn whose entire family comes from the very top-all the fancy, rich ponies, the royal family itself-maybe even a few princesses. But Ice Petal is a different filly. What most foals would easily grab, she will turn away. She desires something much more simple. Nothing special.

And although most ponies would think it completely uncanny, totally strange, she feels that this is truly her destiny.

She wants this so much, she will fight for it.

She does not want to be a fancy, rich, royal pony. She wants to lead a normal life. No more people crowding around her, trying to get her signature. No more.

She wants to be a farmer.

But who can help her? Nopony is going to accept her..

But maybe that shy colt that sits in the back of his class? And doodles on his notebook all day? Maybe.

Whatever she does, she must become a farmer.

It is her destiny.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

Needs work on grammar and also its pretty hard to read a wall of text, IMO. Good story, nonetheless...:duck:

There's a very good story here, in need of a little clean-up work. I'll stick around for the next installment.

Interesting, a unicorn who wants to do an earth pony job.

WHOA! Seven likes already and no dislikes? Awesome! I was afraid it wouldn't be very popular, but I guess this proves me wrong! :pinkiehappy:
This is my first story that hasn't gotten any dislikes!! :yay: Yay!!!! :D

Sorry about the short chapters, I'm not a very good writer.

Good concept, consider it added to my read list.:ajsmug:

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I had a one shot about Scootaloo that I spent next to no effort on and got several likes. Took a while for a dislike to show up.

And guess what? I think nothing of that story.

And you? This story looks like you actually tried. It's probably destined to get better reception.

Your even younger than me, and better as well.

And I think that I might actually work on my Blazing Muzzles rewrite. Or write something new. (Gonna involve some gore, might not be the most kid-friendly thing in the world)

You have an editor yet? You'll probably find several thousand on this site better than me, but I can spot gaping mistakes.

interesting start on a story project. i always like these stories about someone trying to be something not within their limits proposed by society, all the drama, destiny, bloodshed. the racist bit** getting slaped upside her ego filled head:pinkiehappy:

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