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I am nothing great, just a pony who enjoys reading great stories and trying my best to tell some myself.

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Flash Sentry is posted as bodyguard for the new princess on the block. His life won't ever be the same ever again.

Art done by: ChainChomp2

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 25 )

you know what? fuck it! ill read flashlight crap.
im still glad that hes not in season 4 it was confirmed.

No hate from me, but prepare for downvotes, man. People don't seem to take too kindly to Flash Sentry.

3297943
I know that there will a tone of down votes, but he is the best pony to write with. He is so blank that I can do what ever I want with him. This goes double with just using the pony version of him. :twilightsmile:

Cute! Pretty good so far.

3297958

Cool, but like I said; I'm good with whatever, just don't be too suprised if this isn't received well.

3298085
I'm always thinking the worse for my stories when I posted them. :twilightsheepish:

while i don't read flashlight period i'll read this if only for the hilarity that will ensue

3298318
Thank you, I'm glad I can bring laughs to someponies face. Even if I use Flash in my story.

yeah people are going to downvote this story solely because it has flash sentry in it no other reason they wont even bother reading it. and there will be the ones who would also downvote the comments as well

3298347
I know, but I don't care. They can down vote it all they want. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Justy deleted Oct 5th, 2013

3298360 you might want to polish up the grammar. There are some nasty errors even in the opening blurb. Also the premise sounds kind of cruel from what I can tell (again, the grammar makes it hard to decipher).

3298360 Let them, they will all have downvoted soon, and it only realy matters that people acually like the story. honestly, i would not mind seeing more of this, and you are a better writer than me, if the ratings are anything to go by...

3313664
I wouldn't go so far as saying that I'm a good writer. I'm just a writer and love what I'm doing. I will try not keeping you waiting long on the next chapter of the story.

3297958

He was her bodyguard and the bodyguard doesn’t need to know much about the pony they are guarding.

*Groans* I see that whoever is in charge of training the guards are getting lax. Knowing the habits and behaviors of the one they're guarding makes the difference between finding their charge quickly, or taking longer, or even not at all. It can also make the difference between spotting imposters posing as their charge. So, whoever is in charge of training Flash Sentry needs to get their act together. Because, next time, it could be the princess lost/ pony-napped, substituted with a fake.

Peace,

AuthorGenesis

3326122
You don't know how many ideas you have just given me for how this story could go. Thank you :twilightsheepish:

I'd like to see more of this.

Nice beginning chapter, but I can't help to wonder why hasn't the second chapter in published. This seems like it could be a great story.

3751221
I'm sorry about not working on this story in a while. I got kind of side track with another story I'm working on. I'm really sorry.:twilightsmile:

When is da update?

when are you posting the next chapter??

3297932 Good job, be a man and tough it out. Frankly I don't care either way, Its just another character to me. I read this stuff for inspiration in my own stories, no cares for who the characters are. And the only reasons I can think of to downvote would be if the stories poorly written, or contains BAD content. That's all, keep on writing, and good luck.

Should I assume you, and therefore the story, are both dead?

6517437 I can assure you that I am very much alive. Just a lot on my plate right now. Writing classes in college seem to take a lot of time. I will do my best to start working on updating all my stories, here soon. I am very sorry for that lack of updates.

6518856
Hey look! I found a mistake! (I am so sleep deprived right now)

His drifted close

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