The Aristocrats

Finding himself in Canterlot, The Doctor bumps into Fancy Pants and Fleur de Lis and stumbles across a high society auction with questionable individuals with strong beliefs in Unicorn Supremacy-can the trio uncover the evils the society commits behind closed doors?

More importantly, can they survive?

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lmagine

lmagine #1 · Oct 6th, 2013 · · ·

Smarty Pants

You should fix that. For a second I thought Fancy Pants turned into Smarty Pants. Anyway, a very good story you have here. I liked it.

Ianpiersonjdavis

Ianpiersonjdavis #2 · Oct 6th, 2013 · · ·

3307029

DAMN IT!

I knew I was going to do that at some point.

Thanks for catching it.

Arzoo

Arzoo #3 · Oct 6th, 2013 · · ·

Anything titled The Aristocrats and not rated mature is impossible.

Ianpiersonjdavis

Ianpiersonjdavis #4 · Oct 6th, 2013 · · ·

3307129

That's what they said about Button fics.

(But, I apologize if I disappointed you.)

Charzoid

Charzoid #5 · Oct 6th, 2013 · · ·

I added this to my group "the good prince" for blueblood's role.
Little stories like this with the doctor are always fun. Great job.

Comment posted by Selias deleted May 26th, 2014

ocelloid

ocelloid #7 · Jun 6th, 2014 · · ·

Oh i thought it's that disturbing joke...

Dusty the Royal Janitor

Dusty the Royal Janitor #8 · Jun 12th, 2014 · · ·

It's a good concept but incredibly short. This is the sort of thing you could spin into a multi-chapter epic of a mystery, but you wrote less than 2000 words. And while your grasp of writing is by no means poor, the result is that the story moves way too fast to really get a hold of what's going on and let the reader immerse themselves into the story.

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