I was angry. My brother ruined my computer. I needed to cool off. I took the path I always take. Little did I know, I wasn't the same this time. I was transported to the magical land of Equestria. I had to find my way back, and make a few friends on the way.
This is one of those HiE fics. Is it not?
Rainbow dash attacking hooman.
Twilight asking hooman questions.
Pinkie inviting to parties.
"Number one assistant spike."
Yeah it is. However. I will give you my favorite. Please make moar.
oh crap you gonna get mauled by a Godess son!
so many grammar faults :/ but i will read anyways :)
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I'm workin on it okay?
LOL how's it HANGING HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAAAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!
Oh no...Twilight's long lectures on magic!!!! HEAD FOR THE HILLS!!!!!!!!!!
I am not one to judge of grammar, awesome fic
3322745AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAh (10 hours later) AAHAHAHAh
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hey hey guy... smell my flower! *sniffs* mmmmmmm *snake burst out and try's to eat guy* guy: LOL!asdf mov
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I baked you a pie!
Boy, this sucks
It's just an apple
3336398 oh boy,what flavour? :D
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Pie flavor.
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ehhhh, fuck you
3337121 how dare you insult the apples like that?! chose between candy and apples; take the apples!
3336398 Oh BOY WHAT FLAVOR
3339199 same
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Pie flavor.
3337121
I hadn't eaten anything in a while, did you read the context you asshat?
FIRST!
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What chu' talkin 'bout, boy?
GREAT! oh and FIRST!
3355426I was the first comment on that chapter
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0h.
I feel bad for her if she only gets the ones from the one year
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Yeah rly.
3428462ohmygosh he will die then
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You'll have to wait and see.
3428469wut? ohhhh he gonna get ppppwwwnnnddd
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Lol
Will there be romance in this or not? Considering there is no romance tag.
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I think there will be, I'll add it.
lol
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3437948 LOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOLOLOLOL i dont remember anymore
What did Discord do to Kevin? And, will you ever make Kevin into a pony? 'Cause I think that would be totally awesome, no to mention it would really help with Kevin and Luna's relationship. Which reminds me: dwaaaaaaaa!!!!
Random moustache!
This story... I've seen it before. The way it ended, was the human somehow splitting himself into two beings. One human, the other alicorn. The human went back to live in the human world while the alicorn stayed with Luna.
I swear, there are too many similarities to it. You stole this fic. Admit it.
I'm not even joking. I remember reading this same exact story, down to the letter, like a year and a half ago.
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I'm not sure how... Those are some good ideas...
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3442361 ...And I just gave you an excuse to use that ending. Fuck.
Whatever, I guess it shouldn't bug me much. I just don't see why you didn't try copying a better fic than that one. That one kinda sucked...
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What are you talking about? You callin my fic bad?
3443682 Honestly? Yes it is. It is extremely un-creative and the grammar mistakes ruin it further. Everything that happens in it is easily seen coming and cliche. If I were to rate it 1/10, I'd give it a 2, and that's only because I've seen much, MUCH, worse.
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Oh, you are an asshole.
3444447 I'm just being honest. I'm not even a true critic. If a real critic actually found this and decided to comment, that would have been a lot worse than what I said.
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That's true.
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3444624 Lol? Wtf man.