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Prince Dusk Glow has left Ponyville to explore Equestria. What adventures are waiting for him? And what new friends will he make along the way?

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Comments ( 63 )

Yes! Thank you, I was so delighted to see this. :rainbowkiss: Good job, I can't wait to continue to read about Dusk's journey.

I like your progression of Appleloosa and its citizens and their relationship with the buffalo.

3380799 Don't worry, this was just a starter chapter, to ease you in. There'll be action coming into the story soon enough.

:O I love you for continuing this! :twilightsmile: reading the first chapter I know this is going to be a great story! :heart:

This story is going good so far, but I hope there will at least be some fighting or something like that (sorry I like stories with some action) but I can't wait for more though.

It is good to see that Dusk has befriended Trixie's son, Trickster at the end.

"Your mother taught me a valuable lesson." Trixie reminisced. "Before, I was a pompous, arrogant, braggart. But she helped me be better then that." She cast a dissaproving look at her son. "Unfortunately, such negative traits seem to be hereditary."
Trickster looked away huffily.

Ouch.

I got it! I know what I'm changing my name to! I'm changing it to Nova

3405053 You don't have to. I wasn't trying to rip off your name, or anything. I chose Starlight bcause it seemed logical (Twilight, Starlight, y'know).

I noticed Dusk is close to Manehattan, where Dazzle is modeling. Will we see in the next chapter a reencounter between them?:pinkiesmile:

3412571 Great:pinkiehappy:! I can hardly wait for Thursday:pinkiecrazy:.

Ordinarily I'd say they'd have trouble using it as evidence against Flim and Flam in a Court of Law because of how they got the evidence. However since one of the business partners came across it and is willing to spill the beans, (not to mention possible differences in Equestrian Law as compared to US law).

Prince Dusk should be thankful that Breaking and Entering is the only thing he had to morally compromise himself over.

Poor Captain Benjamin Sisko had to do much worse to get an edge in a far more desperate situation where the fate of 800 billion lives were at stake.

I'd have posted just those last two minutes but I figured a bit more context might be needed for some of the confessions.

I don't mind really... I really don't knowhy my name is Starlight... And I like Nova better ;) don't worry...

PS my friend's name is Dusk Glimmer... It's a bit like Sunset Shimmer she acts like her too....

And funny, I'm a princess too... Who cares anyway.... :P

You might want to fix this:
You wanna prove these guys are ripping foks off, right

The song sung reminded me of this.

One of my favorite chapters too!:twilightsmile:

Another flash, and he was wearing a black-and-red shirt, with a strange gold and silver badge on the chest. "Boldly going where no pony has gone before!"

Trust me Dusk, Equestria got off lucky with Discord, at least he didn't introduce you to the Borg...

As Dusk spent the rest of the night there, he reflected on how lucky he was, and made a note to visit his paternal grndparents before leaving the next day; He didn't want to leave them out; After all, there was more then enough room in his heart for all of them.

There should be an A in grandparents.:pinkiehappy:

Like these chapters. Keep up the good work.

Excellent job with this chapter. You portray Red very well, and got his accent down like science! :eeyup:

Where will Dusk go now? North or south? I am eager to find out:pinkiehappy:. I bet if he goes to the north, he goes to the Crystal Empire, isn't it?:trixieshiftright:

Oh dear. It seems Dusk's journey has taken a more dramatic shift.

Queen Chrysalis is blasting off again!

OOHH I WAS EXPECTED REDEMPTION

3525086 You know, me too. But what can you do? There is always the future.

Will this be the last story in this arc?

Anything planned next? I'd like to see where Dusk goes from here.:pinkiehappy:

Regardless, I like your stories. Kudos.

Please don't say this was the Last story for Dusk!:pinkiesad2:

3530617 For now, it's hard to say. I'm planning on doing a request story for a friend next. After that, who knows?

perfect end to a good story hope there is a another

Please write another story!!!! I love these have read them like 20 times

YOU BETTER MAKE ANOTHER DAMN STORY ABOUT DUSK AND DAZZLE'S ROMANCE
:trollestia:OR ELSE:trollestia:
:ajbemused:

We need another Dusk story! :flutterrage: :flutterrage: :flutterrage:

Why is Dusk traveing?

4797634 That's explained in the last chapter of the previous story, "The Young Prince".

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3388341 agreed I have been reading the story's first chapter and from what I've seen it is gettin good.:twilightsmile:

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Seriously? Given who Dusk's parents are, it's not that unreasonable to expect readers to assume that his parents would have taught him things like how to fight and spells to fight changelings...

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