Five at Five

Rainbow Dash only has five bits when she gets off of work at five. What all can she do with only five bits to play with? And what is she going to spend that hard earned money on? The answer to both questions is "rather a lot, really."

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Soft Shell

Soft Shell #1 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

*Sigh*
Rainbow Dash why are you always darting back and forth
between Awesomeness And Jerkyness?
Thats right i said Jerkyness!

Fireseeker

Fireseeker #2 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

Meh, nothing special but enjoyable

Slate Sadpony

Slate Sadpony #3 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

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Because she is Rainbow Dash.

Slate Sadpony

Slate Sadpony #4 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

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I consider this a "doodle."

Glad you liked it :)

Comment posted by Soft Shell deleted Oct 21st, 2013

Themaskedferret

Themaskedferret #6 · Nov 7th, 2013 · · ·

Very well done. Relaxing and fast paced by turns and very fun. A difficult trick to pull off.

Slate Sadpony

Slate Sadpony #7 · Nov 8th, 2013 · · ·

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Glad you enjoyed it :)

Shadow_Wolf

Shadow_Wolf #8 · Dec 20th, 2013 · · ·

An enjoyable read indeed!

Slate Sadpony

Slate Sadpony #9 · Dec 20th, 2013 · · ·

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Glad you liked it!

Was there anything in particular that you enjoyed?

Shadow_Wolf

Shadow_Wolf #10 · Dec 23rd, 2013 · · ·

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I'm afraid I can't pick a particular aspect that I enjoyed more than any of the others. The whole story was just a really enjoyable read and I liked the way Dash interacted with everypony else while dealing with the various situations she got into as the day progressed.

Slate Sadpony

Slate Sadpony #11 · Dec 25th, 2013 · · ·

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I'm glad, that is what I was going for. Just an afternoon with Rainbow Dash being Rainbow Dash. She's awesome, and while not modest, she doesn't overreach.

I was just worried I'd come off as obsessing over her or making her perfect or something, since it's clear I kinda have feelings for her.

Shadow_Wolf