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Dashie Bro


I'm a teenage brony. I'm also a Youtuber, a fimfiction writer an all around nerd. I hope to write great stories that my fans will love. I do this all for them and because I love it!

Comments ( 21 )

is that only one chapter to this story or is there more chapters

3543823 I don't know yet. Maybe more chapters.:derpyderp1:

3543842 ok and did you notice that it say the first chapter is release on 30th Oct 2013

3543855 I know. That's when I started.

3543873 ok and then why dose it say it was First Published
27th Nov 2013 Last Modified
27th Nov 2013

3543888 I just finished it then.

well...that escalated quickly..:rainbowderp:

3546035 I know. I tried to drag it out a bit longer, but I ran out of ideas:facehoof:

3546223

No worries, mate.:twilightsmile:. Laughed when Flare just showed off his crotch infront of Dash :rainbowlaugh:

I had the pleasant time to enjoy this story :pinkiehappy:
Lookin' forward for more of your work, keep it up :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

... What the fuck did I just read? Not sure how to go about a review on this one. Decently well-written, a few grammatical errors, but the pacing was off a bit, and I could go on for a while about the WTF value. Rainbow's brother gets horny for the first time, and Rainbow gives him a basic showing of how to masturbate, but then decides to go on from there and do straight-up sex? At least they're not blood-related.



Curious. I have started actually enjoying a couple clops as of late. If I can find one more where I don't have to pause to start retching, I'll be forced to admit that I perhaps actually like them. Let's hope it doesn't come to that.

bitch you made me choke on a shortbread cookie...thanks now i dont have to choke myself while i choke myself...jk
pretty hot

btw

you ran all the way here to show me your dick

lolololololol:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:ololololololololololololololol:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

okay seriously last one
when she said not to tell anypony if that were me i would have screamed in my head FFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKKK YYYEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHH

3548358 Umm.....is that a neutral or a negative review? I can work off of either.

This was good but I have some criticism. It felt too short for one thing, also I didnt feel like it mattered that it was Dash in the story since we spent no time at all with her nor with her in the little brothers presence.

3581259 I know. I wanted to add some backstory on how their siblings, but I had no idea what to write.

It was good but :pinkiegasp:OMG THE ERRORS!!! There's so many!!!:fluttershyouch::facehoof:

It seems like every slice of life clopfic ends with both characters saying they love each other.

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