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is that only one chapter to this story or is there more chapters
3543823 I don't know yet. Maybe more chapters.
3543842 ok and did you notice that it say the first chapter is release on 30th Oct 2013
3543855 I know. That's when I started.
3543873 ok and then why dose it say it was First Published
27th Nov 2013 Last Modified
27th Nov 2013
3543888 I just finished it then.
3543894 ok
well...that escalated quickly..
3546035 I know. I tried to drag it out a bit longer, but I ran out of ideas
3546223
No worries, mate.. Laughed when Flare just showed off his crotch infront of Dash
I had the pleasant time to enjoy this story
Lookin' forward for more of your work, keep it up
... What the fuck did I just read? Not sure how to go about a review on this one. Decently well-written, a few grammatical errors, but the pacing was off a bit, and I could go on for a while about the WTF value. Rainbow's brother gets horny for the first time, and Rainbow gives him a basic showing of how to masturbate, but then decides to go on from there and do straight-up sex? At least they're not blood-related.
Curious. I have started actually enjoying a couple clops as of late. If I can find one more where I don't have to pause to start retching, I'll be forced to admit that I perhaps actually like them. Let's hope it doesn't come to that.
bitch you made me choke on a shortbread cookie...thanks now i dont have to choke myself while i choke myself...jk
pretty hot
btw
lololololololololololololololololololololol
okay seriously last one
when she said not to tell anypony if that were me i would have screamed in my head FFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKKK YYYEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHH
3548358 Umm.....is that a neutral or a negative review? I can work off of either.
3550128 Neutral.
This was good but I have some criticism. It felt too short for one thing, also I didnt feel like it mattered that it was Dash in the story since we spent no time at all with her nor with her in the little brothers presence.
3581259 I know. I wanted to add some backstory on how their siblings, but I had no idea what to write.
And it's back.
It was good but OMG THE ERRORS!!! There's so many!!!
It seems like every slice of life clopfic ends with both characters saying they love each other.