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Twinkletail


I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.

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Rarity has planned a big date in Canterlot for herself and Twilight. Twilight's well aware of how gorgeous Rarity will look, and feels the need to improve her own image.

Written for One-Shotober.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 24 )

You're stuff's great and all... but why am I getting notifications from you... I'm not following you.

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Huh? That's kinda odd...I wish I could tell you, but i honestly have no idea :rainbowhuh:

3394735 Mh, Whatever! I'll follow you anyway, I've been reading these ghost messages for too long!

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I agree with everything this *Templar* says,
and yes this includes the curiousity about phantom notifications,
not that i get them, but i want to know why he does,
also im jealous i dont get phantom notifications,
Phantoms are cool.

Hmm.

This is a good one.

Nice touch at the end.

~Skeeter The Lurker

3394749 You again! And in my mind, I'm a Templar.

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Oh no he saw me,
Quick Wonder Changling powers activate!
Form of!!!
A Baked potato!!!
*Changes into a baked potato, and does potato things*

3394772 I love potatoes... especially baked ones.

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And so my master plan to steal your emotional energy by turning into a potato enters phase 2.

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Walks in with a plate, knife, and a piece of butter.

Yo Twinkle, submit this to the contest in the RariTwi group too amigo. Love to see some of your works there as well

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The butter only makes you love him more.

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Ha jokes on you!
I taste terrible!

Kinda bland and telly, but the premise is beautiful.

:twilightsmile::heart::raritystarry:

love it :raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush::heart::twilightsmile::heart::raritywink:

This is so cute.:rainbowkiss:

SHL

Very nice :pinkiehappy:

Adorable ending.

:twilightblush::raritywink::heart: That was like, so awesome. X3 I don't even SHIP RariTwi, and you made it look good.
Well done.~

Damn. :rainbowderp:

I'm speechless.

That was a beautiful ending, just simple and perfect.:twilightsmile: I think you know well how to say only what needs to be said.

Sweet and cute loved it!

Honestly, I wish that there was a bit more to the ending, but other than that; great job!!! :twilightsmile: :raritywink:

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