Discord has become bored in his new life in Canterlot. What does he do to become un-bored? Playing around with the mane six.
I make dark fics, and also comdey, though not as well. Although, people do like Discord is Bored, so I guess I'm good at it. Dark is what I do better, though.
Discord has become bored in his new life in Canterlot. What does he do to become un-bored? Playing around with the mane six.
The comma and the period need to be inside the quotation marks, and the quotation marks should be double, not single.
"Mismatched" is one word.
The period needs to be inside the quotation marks and the quotation marks should be double, not single.
I am not sure what accent you are going for here, however Applejack's southern accent would not omit the "s" in "this."
Other than those few errors, this was pretty good. Nice, and pretty funny.
3420704 Thanks! I shall fix them as soon as I can
i love this so much. hadn't had such a laugh in school before, but this is what I do on free time
3420955 I'm glad you like it!
You got Solaris right! (BTW Luna's is Artemis)
3420983 Thanks for telling me!
I kind of wish there were more chapters
3421030 I could make a sequel, but since this was published today, I think that might be to soon
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Maybe you could have discord open a portal to the opposite gender universe or what ever it's called.
3421092 it's called Rule 63. i don't know why, but my pony self feels...... nicer.......
3421005 No problem, "fellow" Equestrian.
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Explain.
3421794 well, i'm actually supposed to be a kitsune, but for some reason, i am an equestrian now, i can't even speak my native language anymore!!!!!! And, for a\one reason or another, i feel more pleasant.
3421794 (i'm back in black for plot convenience)
Nooooooooo!
3420963 awsome I wish my sister could write like you can, this story will stick in my mind forever like spike mustach
3422071 Lol, thanks. This story is getting more hype then my main story!
Honestly... Eh.
My main problem with this story is that there's very little substance, yet it also feels rushed and, in the beginning, squished, and it doesn't really build up to anything.
I mean, they're genderbent.
Oh wait, Celestia fixed it.
The End.
And that's the meat of the story.
3518552 If you didn't like it, that's ok, I really wasn't trying on this story. For some reason it got more hype then my main story, The Tribe of the Everfree Forest, so some people liked it, I guess.
Nice detraction reading.
Discord was not allowed to wreak chaos unto Equestria anymore
It's onto noot unto.
But very creative story.I know there was a male version of the mane 6 and Celistia but I didn't know what Celtisas male name and discords female name is but I do now.
thx
The cover art reminds me of Rayman