There is a screw-up in the ponyville whether plan and Rainbow Dash has to chose between cancelling an important holiday, or keeping the crops alive. More importantly, she needs to decide between friends.
Come one, come all!
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A nice little story, keep it up!
Please make MOAR!!!
That was resolved way too quickly and easily. There was a hint of conflict, but then, poof! It's gone. You were in so much of a rush to finish that it severely impacted the quality. This could've been good if you had taken your time and stretched all the scenes out more.
You also have a spelling problem: the word you're looking for is "weather", not "whether".