deactived, thanks for hanging around.
After years of training, and becoming one of Equestria's best fliers, Scootaloo realizes she's come such a long way from her childhood. Now a nineteen year old mare on her way to becoming part of the Wonderbolts, she decides it's time to face the one challenge that's been dogging her since she was still Cutie Mark Crusading...
A little something I threw together. I <3 ScootaDash for some reason. It just warms the heart, ya know?
(Art not done by me)
-TLC
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*reads title*
I know where this is going
Two things:
1) Romance between Dash and Scoot? I like, though the title picture makes the story (even if set in the future)... a little awkward for me (See "Soft Candy")
2) DROPPING A LOVE BOMB YOU SAY!?!?
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nice story, shame its soo short
294909 Be glad it's that pic. The other one that I drew was...
never mind.
295881
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Now you've perked my curiosity...
* manly tear *
*CLAP**CLAP**CLAP**CLAP*
Awesome story
This... more...nao!
Pedo Dash?
Write a fic about Scootaloo and Dash getting together, have ponies talk about pedophilia.
Hoof in hoof, I suppose.
I've enjoyed the story, but I'm afraid not quite in the way it was intended to. In fact, I giggled like mad through most of it.
All thanks to the most horribly awesome typo I've ever seen:
" and her eyes...Scootaloo took a glance into those violet worm pools and lost her train of thought."
Maybe I'm just reading too much grimdark, but you can imagine what I imagined
309521 Hehe, it was intended to be a little cute. I laughed reading that line in your comment just now.
Cute ending!
But there was one moment that really really REALLY irked me for whatever reason...
Dash falls with bound wings... ok
Scoot comes down to catch her... ok
Scoot catches Dash... ok
They tumble into bushes... ok
Heartfelt moment where Dash says cute things... ok
They instantly are on a cloud looking over a sunset without ever mentioning breaking their embrace, let alone flying up... o-... wait what?
344178 Oh crap...
Edit fail. My bad! Original ending was that Dash breaks the rope and catches scoot, but happy ending all the same. Thanks for catching that!
Fix'd!
344190
Nah, its ok! I once nearly posted something that had a "pony" change races and genders at least twice... and neither I nor my editor found it until 5 minutes before I posted
I think it is a good story. But I saw some grammar. It's Train not Tram
YES!
I know it seems odd but instead of it being all serious like:
it was more lols like:
Me and Rainbow Dash as a couple? That's like Pinkie and Twilight, Rarity and Spike...or Soarin' and a pie...
Well, if some parts of the fandom are to be beloeved, then I'd say you've got good chances.
A few minutes later, she came back out, her wings were tied down with rope. As she walked towards the edge of the porch, Dash turned to Scootaloo and smiled.
I'm laughing because of how quickly things seemed to escalate there. And she's so CALM, too.