Holy crap Im first

344832 congrats have a cupcake specialy made from ahem a firster

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i have a feeling they will become the best of friends very soon...

... I see a Luna-mance coming.

I don't like how ponies treat him...they are assholes other than Fluttershy and Luna

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Holy shit! is your avatar Thing thing?

- Staying with Twilight
- Working on Sweet Apple Acres
- Have to prove whether he is safe

Yep, this story has it all

2171426 It is MADNESS!

Ah another fic where the ponies can’t take fuck off for an answer, treat the human like a lesser and strong arm them into working on AJ’s farm… *shakes head* Oh well let’s begin down the road to Stockholm syndrome. And this story had such a promising start.

Argh... so much of this chapter is so cliche that it brought physical pain upon my eyes...

GOD DAMN IT ALL, IT'S ALWAYS SWEET APPLE FREAKING ACRES

2878689 eeyup.

Everyone who is complaining about him having to prove himself, look at Zecora! She at least LOOKED like one of them and still got shunned out because she was different, imagine a large bipedeal creature armed to the teeth that escaped them once.

What kind of messed up version of reality did Miles even come from? This is all so confusing.

You know... Rereading this and knowing what I know from the entire rest of your story, things are just so much more interesting! And it's so hard for me to not reply to all the comments made in the past week or so telling them what's going on...

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oh good, so there'll be answers later.

I smell shipping ahead. Also, I should REALLY get to sleep. I'm getting so tired I might fall asleep on the keyboaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

It took me all of 3 chapters to figure out that the columns are trees...

"Yeah, Tempus and Spatium. Why?"

Yup, the alicorns of Time and Space, that's not OP at all. Sheesh, sounds like a pokemon movie.

3651399 wait those are trees?

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It took me a couple paragraphs to figure that out... wait, I'm being an ass, aren't I?

So wait, Miles is forced to work in Sweet Apple Acres and also under supervision of Twilight, because they claim his dangerous. WHAT THE FUCK!!! Miles barely did anything to deserve this, it's Twilight, Applejack and Fluttershy should be punished.

First they chase Miles thinking that he's some wild animal and knock him out unconscious, then they take him to the barn and tie him up. Next they tell Miles that he wont be freed, unless he answers their questions. Lastly they go and chase Miles again, after they find out that Miles is an intelligent being, capable of speaking. The first incident was understandable, but after they found out Miles could speak, they should have freed him.

They should be charged for assault and kidnapping, all because Miles was a different. Also, someone said that they did this, because Miles was a unknown species, he was armed and looked dangerous; that's not a good excess to go around knocking people unconscious, tie them up and force them to asnwer your questions.

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Don't forget that most of the damage he has to pay off probably came from that grenade he had to slap out of Big Mac's mouth and then throw ojt the window. He also had to keep the guard from accidentaly shooting himself. Don't worry though, just be sure to engage your 'willing suspense of disbelief.'

3651399 i didnt realize tht after finishing it o.o i think i may need more coffee......

4625059 Same, It took me 1 - to 7 to know.

"Well Miles, I've decided your fate," she says as she stands up and approaches me. Well, here it comes. "You will live here in Ponyville, under the supervision of Twilight Sparkle. She will be the one to determine whether you are a threat to the ponies of Equestria or not. I am also stationing a royal guard to follow you around. He will act as your liaison to Equestria. I will visit from time to time to check on you until you are deemed harmless to ponykind, at which time you will be set free. You will also work at

huh why am I getting a sense of de-za-voo (idk how to spell it ok!) from this... oooyeahh that's because it's overused

5313978 deja vu. Yes I know it sounds nothing like how it's spelled.

Also I agree it's waaay overused.

I waited to comment until I finished what I considered the Prologue and I was in the actual story.

Anyway, you created a universe that is extremely vast. This is great and you should continue.

3651399 why

3651399 malayaraya.files.wordpress.com/2013/01/good-job-retard.jpg (no hate intended)

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I didn't know until I saw the comment. My suspension was apparently so strong, that I imagined MARBLE COLUMNS in the middle of Ponyville.

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I cannot express the amount of SHEER YES that this comment needs.

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5 gold bits says he murdered Luna/Tia's Parents!

Another 10 bits says Discord was an experiment from Topaz falls!

3891181 Tell that to most countries government. Lol

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That's because it's French, not English

OK, after being very confused... my mind just gt blown. Thanks!

I really hope this is not just another story where the MC lives in ponyvill and the hole story is boaring af because ive loved the setting so far.

I...am so, so very lost right now.

8088359 try 5 am when I should be sleeping and prepping for finals. Like, the finals that determine if I graduate with a college degree or not.

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did ya pass

I met some once. Good peo—er, ponies. They were representing all ponykind during some important negotiations, so I assumed that all ponies looked like that." Luna's face lights up at this.
"Did you happen to get their names, by any chance?"
"Yeah, Tempus and Spatium. Why?" She recoils as if she's about to faint.
"U-uh, nothing. I was... just curious. So..."

Well there's the connection between the human and pony era

Fucking asshole royal guard. Hope he gets some karma. And also when is this story taking place in? like what season of the show? Will he meet and fight Discord and all the other villains?

The first thing to come to mind is that ‘moon’... that beautiful moon.

Yeah, Luna's cutie mark really accents dat ass.

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*cringe Intensifies*

With the beginning being as it was, and his military training, and his magic, i expected this meeting to go quite differently.

Действительно для офицера с экипировкой и подготовкой не хватает описания экшена сцен с самого начала в Вечно Свободном Лесу! Я бы добавил кое каких неприятностей и неожиданностей свалившихся с разных сторон и возможно потерю сознания от ран. А далее приходя в чувство уже в домике Элемента Доброты. И тут снова экшен погоня ну и дальше можно развить фантазию. Вообщем не хватает изюминки! Или Вишенки на торте! но все же у этой истории есть шанс на жизнь так как автор работает на этим уже несколько лет, опыт повышается.

"I met some once. Good peo—er, ponies. They were representing all ponykind during some important negotiations, so I assumed that all ponies looked like that." Luna's face lights up at this.

Well I guess that explains the connection to ponies.

"Well Miles, I've decided your fate," she says as she stands up and approaches me. Well, here it comes. "You will live here in Ponyville, under the supervision of Twilight Sparkle. She will be the one to determine whether you are a threat to the ponies of Equestria or not. I am also stationing a royal guard to follow you around. He will act as your liaison to Equestria. I will visit from time to time to check on you until you are deemed harmless to ponykind, at which time you will be set free. You will also work at Sweet Apple Acres until you have repaid your debt for the damages caused. Do you have any questions?"

I'm sorry... What?

Okay. Yeah. I'm done. I've managed to stumble my way through these first few chapters, but it has not endeared me enough to continue. There are just too many missing bits of information to follow the narrative. There is no logic here. Everything so far has felt so... forced. The human characters were introduced so quickly that I was unable to tell them apart - let alone care about them. And now there's this contrived reason for this main character (who is somehow supposed to be super powerful in magic or something?) to be glued to the Mane 6. Also, if he is supposed to be a career soldier he doesn't really act like one.

Yeah... I'm not gonna slog through 1.3 million words of this.

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Hit all the point I was thinking couldn't agree more