Just a guy that love a few things too much, drawing, videogames, music(dubstep), and now writing. Here we go
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You do realize your only suppose to post your clopfic in one folder, right? Because you posted it in three... and one of them was the human x pony folder. I don't see a human tag.
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Yeah I hit the wrong thing I'll remove the extras.
best fic yet
3471044
Thanks son, I'll be sure to keep up the good work.
very good fic plus i want to see what happens next
Grammar mistakes aside (of which there were plenty), really good story. Can't wait to read more.
3471789
Yeah I'm working on that and it will be better. Just you wait.
3474529
Umm...that's not a bad idea...tell you what if you got the time, I would love to work with you on something like that. Either way I'm do it.
3476436
Well do. I'm already planning for it.
Pretty good update but what's with the font ?
3532676
I have no idea, I've tried changing it. Maybe I'll try again later.
3532683col I was just curious...... keep up the work I'm enjoying the story so far
3532848
Thanks I try my best.
3532866 your wlecome buddy
dude we need back story on this guy you can make a hole fic on just how he showed up and Spike gets a hot dragon girl
3535681
Don't worry I have that in the works, but I'm going to let this story grow first then back story time.
3536131 kk
You know what? I think I want to find more about Spike and Rarity than anything else. It had Soul laughing, I am pretty I will laugh too, even if it is serious as fuck. I love bad things...
Okay, I'm definitely seeing a lot of problems with similar looking/sounding words (soaring instead of snoring, opinion instead of option), but that and some tensing issues actually seem to be the only thing grammatically wrong.
At least it looks like we'll be getting some action soon, if Nightmare Moon's debut is anything to go by.
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M'kay thanks I'm going over it now and I do see the issues.
dude backstory ASAP or you will lose a lot of readers
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I had planed on doing a backstory in another project when I'm at least half way done with this one. Don't worry it's planed and coming.
Looks like there's a new ship on the beach: Nightmare Comet!
For someone to subscribe to your story and be notified of chapter updates, they favorite it.
If they like it, they'll like it.
And if something is worth commenting on, they'll do it.
Is this not redundant? It actually might put some people off.
3686520
Meh, it just a little like...catchphrase, and I wouldn't think that people wouldn't like it for just that reason.
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You'd be surprise.
So Spike told off Rarity cause of the way she always strung him along to get free labor out of him?
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Something like that, just you wait friend it'll come up.
Seriously need an editor. Tons of obvious spelling errors.
3707740
That seems like a hole-in-one right there, bub.
And more strangely, who is the "stud" that Rarity basically dumped Spike for, and we got to see Spike's girlfriend. On the Rarity front, I hope it isn't Fancy Pants--you already have it that she and Fleur de Lis are proprietors of a boutique in Canterlot similar to Carousel Boutique. Having Fancy as Rarity's boyfriend/husband just pisses me off to no end, and it just seems too obvious and predictable.
Also, I see that we have a few potential interspecies relationships. Does this mean that they can cross breed? Because if that's the case, then I can't really see Spike getting a dragonness as a girlfriend (obviously, it wouldn't be because only he could mate another dragon and have kids, he could have fucked Rarity before he and her broke up) and Spike verbally tearing Rarity a new one. Seriously, that needs a chapter to itself, or at least its own side-story, since obviously Soul knows the whole story.
Seriously, WRITE THAT STORY!!!