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It's fuckin' Tensa Zangetsu
interesting
Definitely going to keep my eye on this.
(After reading description) meh sounds like a regular Tuesday for me
You have my curiosity. Now try to get my attention.
Is this a Bleach crossover?
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Not a bleach crossover, pretty sure that was in author notes.
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No you try to get MY attention!
Not a bad story.
Also, I understand by what you mean how hard it is to get Zecora to rhyme, and I don't really mind.
I hope you update soon. :)
Glad that for the most part, story seems well received, and I don't have any planned release schedule for anyone who is wondering. Also, I recently deleted a comment, I suppose you could call it a negative one. All it really had was a link with a picture I found kinda disgusting, so I removed it. If you have something negative to say, please use the English language to say it. It might get deleted otherwise, so yeah just a heads up.
the person in the picture somehow looks famaliar
3496097 who?
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In Bleach, Ichigo's zanpakuto is Zangetsu. When zangetsu materializes he has the form of a 40-something year old man in black robes and orange glasses.
Ichigos Bankai is Tensa Zangetsu. When in bankai form, zangetsu's form shifts from a 40 year old man, to a 15 year old boy.
The cover picture for the story is an image of Tensa Zangetsu.
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It's a character from the anime Bleach.
3500076 so thats why he looks famaliar
just started watching the show a little while ago
You have my curiosity.
Woo gore!
I vote for evil put to good use. Screw that mushy over coming his past crap!
Can't wait for the next update!
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Well glad you enjoyed it, and I gotta say I like the way you think.
I forgot to put this in author notes, but I was considering doing occasional flashback chapters about his time in tartarus, any thoughts?
i think you mean reducing its eyes.
that part of the sentence makes no sense.
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Yeah I like the idea of flashbacks. I'm sure he was tortured pretty brutally down there. I say go with the idea as long as it doesn't get bad enough to put in a tragedy or sad tag on the story.
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Hmm, surprised spell check didn't pick those up, It was "eye" in the first one, and "gaze" in the second, I'll fix it now.
3510285 oh and i missed
skull
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Damn you Microsoft word! As well as my dependence on it for most errors!
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replace zoidberg with Microsoft
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I don't really think I'd have to put either of those, I mean sure, it would be sad and could be considered a tragedy so I might be asked to add them. I think though that in the context of how it's written, the "Dark" tag should really cover it. I mean, you wouldn't say someone has a sad,tragic and dark past. You'd probably just say he has a dark past. Am I wrong?
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You sir, have brought me the gift of laughter. In return I ask you this, any ponies you want killed? Be reasonable though, and this might actually happen.
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No your right. Just as a matter of personal taste I'm not big on sad stories and I figure a 'child in hell' plot could get pretty sad. I don't know what other tastes are but I personally would prefer the flashbacks didn't make me cry over the poor kid lol.
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Hmm, then if i write them, I would advise you to skip, I would try to go easy on it, but you said it yourself, "child in hell." Not really sure how warm and fuzzy I can make that.
3510307 scare Diamond Tiara shitless maybe?
Hell I JUST thought up a method of torture from the words "warm and fuzzy" and it's not pretty.
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Silly night, it's spelled "stab."
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Haha no I think I'll stick with it anyway. Maybe the demons training him or something, mentions of torture without actually showing to much. Maybe a scene where the demons tell him today he can be tortured or torture someone else, so of course he tries it and finds he likes it. Like that part from Supernatural that I wont detail for spoilers sake.
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Man I love that show. Yeah I'll do what I can when it does get to that point. Hell even with the gore tag I don't think many people wanna play, "how gruesome can this guys imagination get."
Hell I don't even wanna know.
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Haha well if you don't even want to know its gotta be bad.
nice i love it good work
Awesome work!
My thoughts on the romance element are. If you decide to take the "overcome his past" route. My vote goes to Kastiell being with Luna. However if he is unable to become accepted by the ponies. Then my vote goes to him being with Chrysalis.
Truthfully, I love stories with romance but it's not nesasary...
I would like to see romance in this though, always loved the fact how a mare would fall for the anti-hero.
Also, I like the idea of a poor soul overcoming his past, kind of what I got from the description of this story.
BLOOD AND GORE!!! YEAH!!! If you want to you can go for romance, it might be a nice change of pace every once in a while, and it will make the gore stand out more!
Maybe he could be a monster hunter for hire?
Lots of bloody stuff in that line of work...
is this still going?
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Not really sure, think I'll change the status to hiatus, thnx for reminding me about this btw.
Are you gonna start this again soon? I'll even help you edit
5182313 Honestly I don't really know if I will. I don't really have the motivation is the main reason I haven't. I've thought about it, and even came up with a few things to write, but couldn't really bring myself to actually sit down and write you know? Gotta say I was surprised to see a new comment on this though, how the hell did you even stumble upon this?
5182415 I found this on the eighth page while searching 'Human, Dark, Adventure'
I know what you mean, started two stories but got a little...confused, i guess. Do you mind if I start this back up on my account?
5182971 Let me think on that for a couple days, if I decide that I just really will never update, I'll let you know.
5182981 K