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good start.
It's when you get to the stuff in the group i'll start getting critical, though
Good start, I have no idea wats going on but thats the flu talking, but its a good start
Now, a note:
Azathoth is blind, insane, and stuck to his throne. he communicates telepathically in MULTI-COLOR capitals
besides the Parliament, there are the Dancers of Chaos, who are also blind, and dance around his throne. they correspond with the constellations of the Zodiac
Your story sound interesting I'll have to read it later, but I'll still give it a like.
4093386 K, thanks.
4093397 your welcome. And thanks for joining my group.
4093414 Anytime.
I am astonished.
What a great take on the unknown past.
4126989 Thank you very much. Sorry for taking so long to update. <:)
Yes. So Much Yes
Okay, I'm all caught up on the story now. I like how it's gone so far and eagerly await future chapters.
5233979 Wooh, that was quick. Alright, yes, I'm hoping to have two chapters out before Thanksgiving. Thanks for reading. :3
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I just read it all in one go. I usually have pretty fast reading speed.
This was very interesting. The only problem I had was that you had either 1: Forgot to add some more words to the sentences so they made more sense, and 2: The words you had placed was changed around with another word that was meant to be something else entirely.
Other than that, this is a great start. Oh! And I love how the Stallions act against each other, reminds me of Applejack and Rainbow Dash
5379749 That's so nice to hear. Gotta work on those mistakes. But yes, that's the intent I had for those stallions, so nice that you picked it up.
Edit: Thank you also for the fav.
Oh no, I hope their mother doesn't die...that would horrible.